What do u think???

Question

to live is to love,
to love is to feel,
to feel is to hurt,
to hurt is to lose,
to lose is to hate,
to hate is to heal,
to heal is to change,
to change is to risk,
to risk is to love
Love is a risk everyone takes,
some of us win,
some of us lose,
it's a lottery of hearts,
you never know what to expect,
just keep playing the odds and pray for the best

Answer 1

To be candid, I don't agree after the first two lines. Maybe sometimes. But gosh, seems a bit on the negative side, you think? Feeling doesn't have to hurt, hate doesn't heal, to love doesn't have to be a "risk." But who am I to say? You must have written this from your own experiences. Seems sad. & that's what I think.

Edit: No, you don't have to "suffer" in order to know what happiness is. & I see someone else didn't like the bit "to lose is to hate & to hate is to heal." If this "poem" represents how you feel, it has continuity, but one would hope is not true.

Answer 2

In this world that surrounds us
We sometimes brake down and fall
Those who stand above us
Can make us seem so small
We tremble under the weight
Of the problems that hold us down
And when we start to collapse
There seems to be no one around

We try to fight in this world
That always seems to fight back
Sometimes we’re not strong enough though
There are too many things we lack
We’ll hide away in corners
Put upon ourselves pain
But there’s no escape from this life
We all must suffer the same

But although we may struggle
And yes we all do fall
I’ll stand by your side
I’ll stay with you through it all
And if you start to tremble
Or even brake down
I’m your shoulder to cry on
I’ll always be around

We all have our faults
Are up and are downs
We cant always smile all the time
Everyone has to frown
No, no ones perfect
And no one is the same
We’re in this world together
We all play the same game

If we stick together
No matter whats to come
With a little faith and hope
Anything can be done
We all get those bad times
Each and every one of us
But I promise it will get better
Just don’t you give up
But when you feel like you want too
Please just remember this
You can die at any time
But it takes a strong person to live.. :D

Answer 3

A lot of work has gone into this but in places it needs more thought. I dont like the bit to lose is to hate and to hate is to heal

Answer 4

I like how you tied everything together by going through the stages of life basically. I mean it takes all of that to find love, you have to suffer in order to know what happiness truly is.

Answer 5

I think it's crazy and fake like life itself

Answer 6

lovely poem

Answer 7

It sounds good and true

Answer 8

You are amazing......its a lovely poem....God bless you.

Answer 9

u

Answer 10

Great place to exchange poems..........