is this poem good enough?
"There is just something about you,
it's really hard to say.
These feelings for you,
I hope you feel the same way."
btw its for a valentines card
2007-02-13 15:38:23 · 5 answers · asked by wes 2 in Society & Culture ➔ Holidays ➔ Valentine's Day
If you're 15, it's OK. If you're older, try again.
Here's some starting lines:
My eyes had never seen the world until they looked into yours.
I never knew how empty I was until your presence began to fill me.
My breath, my sight, my dreams begin anew when we are once again together.
2007-02-13 15:45:25 · answer #1 · answered by NHBaritone 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
It's cute, but you didn't specify the feelings.. are you going to write "I Luv U!" somewhere on the card? Because I mean.. you could be referring to hate. Or repulsion.
Also, you rhymed "you" and "you," which normally I would scold a person for, but I think it works out alright. Very cute.
2007-02-13 23:47:01 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
not bad but try better like as far is the sky and mountains so high as big as the sea is love you and me there is just something about you its really hard to say the big love,feelings for you ,i know you feel the same way .................because if you still hope forget about charing love
2007-02-13 23:49:30 · answer #3 · answered by laila a 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Gawd...that brought a tears to my eyes...
Good luck.
2007-02-13 23:46:54 · answer #4 · answered by P K 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
if it's genuine, and you care about this person, and they care about you, anything you do or say to them is good enough.
2007-02-13 23:45:37 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋