can some one fix this run on sentence please, i can't do it
On September 13,1810 Miguel Hidalgo and a great army started to take over many cities of Mexico to gain freedom. from Dolores, they moved on to Atotonilco, San Miguel el grande (now Allende), Chamucuero, celaya(whee Miguel Hidalgo received the rank of captain general) , Salmanca, Iraput and Silao, until reaching Guanajuato. On July 18 Miguel Hidalgo was executed. Th is my teachers not "run on break own into several sentences" i really dont know how to do that. can some one please correct the mistakes and do what my teacher said(which idont understand) all u have to do is copy and paste it and correct it Please Help
2007-02-13 14:38:53 · 6 answers · asked by Soap 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
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2007-02-13 15:05:41 · update #1
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2007-02-15 12:50:39 · update #2
To achieve their goal of freedom, Miguel Hidalgo led a great army through many cities of Mexico. First, they conquered Dolores, and then moved into the cities of Atotonilco, San Miguel el grande (Allende), Chamucuero, and Celaya. It was at Celaya that Hidalgo was awarded the rank of Captain General. Following his promotion, General Hidalgo took his army into the cities of Salmanca, Iraput and Silao. He continued leading his army until finally reaching Guanajuato. Captain General Miguel Hidalgo was executed July 18, 1811.
A run-on sentence is basically two separate sentences within one sentence. It is to long and wordy, and makes understanding the sentence difficult. Just watch your punctuation and grammar, and if your sentence is long, try to say it in a different way that still makes sense but with less words. Sometimes, you need to make one long sentence two sentences. Good luck.
2007-02-13 14:59:01 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
On September 13,1810 Miguel Hidalgo and a great army started to take over many cities of Mexico to gain freedom. From Dolores, they moved on to Atotonilco, San Miguel el grande (now Allende), Chamucuero, celaya (where Miguel Hidalgo received the rank of captain general) , Salmanca, Iraput and Silao. Until finally reaching Guanajuato. On July 18 Miguel Hidalgo was executed. )( this is my modified answer)
This my teachers not "run on break own into several sentences" i really dont know how to do that. can some one please correct the mistakes and do what my teacher said(which idont understand) all u have to do is copy and paste it and correct it Please Help ( i am not sure that I understand what that means but okay:) i tried my best but i am not sure this is the for sure answer. I also added a few words !! is that okay??
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p.s. if you are having trouble understanding such an easy concept , I REALLY suggest talking to your teacher for help
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2007-02-13 14:57:29 · answer #2 · answered by dazed and confused 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
On September 13,1810 Miguel Hidalgo and a great army started to take over many of the citied of Mexico to gain freedom. Starting from the city of Dolores, they moved on to Atotonilco, then to San Miguel el grande (now Allende), Chamucuero, Celaya (where Miguel Hidalgo received the rank of captain general), Salmanca, Iraput, and Silao, until reaching the city of Guanajuato. On July 18th Miguel Hidalgo was executed.
Hopefully that helps...though at the end you should probabaly put something that saayd he got captured or something like that...and really if you dont understand the assignment, ask the teacher to help you understand...thats what they are there for and dont worry they wont think you stupid or anything like that...
2007-02-13 14:48:36 · answer #3 · answered by garrwing 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
On September 13,1810 Miguel Hidalgo and a great army started to take over many cities of Mexico to gain freedom. From Dolores, they moved on to Atotonilco, San Miguel el grande, which is now Allende. From there they moved to Chamucuero, celaya, where Miguel Hidalgo received the rank of captain general. They then moved to Salmanca, Iraput and Silao, until reaching Guanajuato. On July 18 Miguel Hidalgo was executed.
2007-02-13 14:48:04 · answer #4 · answered by Lewis 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
On September 13,1810 Miguel Hidalgo and a great army started to take over the many cities of Mexico to gain freedom. Upon reaching Dolores, he moved on to Atotonilco. After Atotonilco he traveled on to San Miguel el grande (now Allende) Chamucuero, celaya,where Miguel Hidalgo received the rank of captain general, Salmanca, Iraput, and eventualy Silao.He then reached Guanajuato. On July 18 Miguel Hidalgo was executed.
2007-02-13 14:47:12 · answer #5 · answered by Beth 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
On September 13,1810 Miguel Hidalgo and a great army started to take over many cities of Mexico to gain freedom. From Dolores, they moved on to Atotonilco. After that the army continued their death march to San Miguel el grande (now Allende), Chamucuero, Celaya. In Celaya Miguel Hidalgo received the rank of captain general. The army then went farther to Salmanca, Iraput and Silao, until reaching Guanajuato. On July 18 Miguel Hidalgo was executed. by the way kid learn to spell
2016-05-24 08:20:07 · answer #6 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋