Recylced hate effused
Black eye abused
Taken from innocence
Mislead by the dead
Brought for harvest
Along I lay chained another day
Here on nightmare bay
2007-02-13 14:23:49 · 4 answers · asked by Frost bite 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
Awesumm
Sounds like your pissed.
2007-02-13 14:28:32 · answer #1 · answered by miseryxlane 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it, actually. It's very dark and meaningful. Keep writing. :-)
PS. I've been hearing some unfavorable things about poetry.com so if you were going to submit this to them, I would check them out thoroughly first.
Best of luck.
2007-02-13 22:29:09 · answer #2 · answered by yumyum 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds like the dark ages (gothic)
U may win money....summit it at http://www.poetry.com
2007-02-13 22:27:20 · answer #3 · answered by sunflare63 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
No.
2007-02-13 23:23:50 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋