it is about whether i would like to live at the beach or the mountains and three reasons why but it has to be good cause my language teacher is really mean and it has to be a high school writing not elementary
2007-02-13 10:19:35 · 6 answers · asked by Andres G 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Primary & Secondary Education
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2007-02-13 12:25:51 · update #1
Firstly- it's a subjective essay I am assuming since your being able to pick the topoic out of 2 variables. That means your grade is going to based or it's originality and grammar,detail content and the basic skills.
You needs to do a venn diagram for yourself and then basically pick which "area" shows more true form of what you'd like to live with. From there just add specific deatils such as a comparitve entry of " living on the beach, feeling the warm hot sand rise between my toes,wrapping my foot in a warm balnket, as the waves roll in and wash away my cares. This would be one reason I would like to live at the beach. For mountains- " Waking up to rolling clouds of white and grey, looking down into the valley's landscape of green tree, rainbow flower fieldsmspotted with the occasion yellow Sunflower, would be the ideal moutain home for me.
2007-02-18 17:51:19 · answer #1 · answered by KATHEYCARCRASHER 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Write it as a monologue. Kinda like Leno does or Letterman.
I would love to live at the beach because.. then do a top ten list like
10. The only crabs I would see would be the kind you boil and eat.
9. Life supply of sand for the cat-don't have to buy kitty litter ever again.
8.The roar of the ocean drowns out my mother's voice
7. Salt water is a fabulous astringent and natural hair lightener-blondes do have more fun...
And go from there-find some of the old monologues and base your essay on the jokes. When I was in college all of my essays were funny and I aced the English classes. Believe me teachers need a laugh every once in a while. Good luck.
If the teacher is a real hard a$$ you might try writing like a romance novel. I should love to live in the mountains with the beauty surrounding my every step until I see the sunrise breaking over the peaks beckoning a new day... really drippy!
2007-02-13 18:37:52 · answer #2 · answered by bomullock 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ya What Bannana Panakes Said
2007-02-13 18:28:13 · answer #3 · answered by Daddiez Girl 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well i would rather live at the beach. First, i love the water. Second, all the different animals. last, i love boats. That's just fuel for thoughts.Peace.
2007-02-20 20:10:47 · answer #4 · answered by boombox 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Start out by deciding which you want (I think that's pretty obvious) and then break your paper down into three parts that address each reason. try the link below - it has sample papers.
2007-02-13 19:17:59 · answer #5 · answered by Katrina V 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
..and what part of that essay do you need help on?
2007-02-13 18:23:58 · answer #6 · answered by Banana Pancakes! 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋