I am mentioning that my main decision to apply to this school is that it provides so many career routes and opportunities because of the campus network of neighboring facilities and programs and it will essentially better myself regardless of my chosen career path.
I am trying to rephrase " better myself"
Instead maybe "enhance my academic standing and character" ....regardless of my
Would just like a second opinion thanks
2007-02-13 08:02:43 · 3 answers · asked by Lindsay M 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Higher Education (University +)
I much prefer "better myself." The alternative you propose sounds like jargon, and does not convey the same kind of sincerity.
2007-02-13 13:28:52 · answer #1 · answered by X 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
My main reason for applying to "this school" is because it provides numerous career opportunities due to the campus network and offered programs. I feel "this school" will help facilitate my career objectives because of the many facets available during my graduate studies.
2007-02-13 16:14:40 · answer #2 · answered by intewonfan 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I personally prefer "better myself". It sounds like an applicant wrote it.
If you use someone else's words, they'll probably spot the plagiarism, and reject you thinking "this guy's a cheater".
2007-02-13 16:21:40 · answer #3 · answered by dude 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋