ok i wrote one pragraph and i need help here is the pragraph i wrote and i need help because i have to take it out so please try to help me so i will know what to write:
Abortion has been said to performed by dilating the woman with a series of metal rods that literally rip the cervix.A vacuum aspiration is placed inside the woman. the sound of this vacuum is described as a piercing sound. the pain is so bad that it will make you scream and cry.
2007-02-13 06:01:31 · 18 answers · asked by Ilovejeovany 1 in Pregnancy & Parenting ➔ Pregnancy
Not true, I would do more research!!! REAL RESEARCH
2007-02-13 06:05:01 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 2⤋
Basically, what you are saying is true. It just needs to be refined a little bit. You should start out with a general statement, like "There are many methods of abortion, all of which kill a living human being and all of which are dangerous for the mother as well." Then, you can talk about the different methods of abortion, abortion risks, and the baby's development. Here is information that will help:
Abortion Techniques:
http://abort73.com/HTML/I-A-3-techniques.html
http://www.teenbreaks.com/abortion/whatisabortion.cfm
Photos and Video of Abortions, Including 1st Trimester Abortions:
http://www.cbrinfo.org/Resources/pictures.html
http://www.abort73.com/HTML/I-A-4-video.html
Information on All Aspects of Abortion:
http://Abort73.com
http://www.abortionfacts.com
Photos and Facts About Prenatal Development:
http://www.justthefacts.org/clar.asp
http://www.abort73.com/HTML/I-A-2-prenatal.html
Pain Perception in the Unborn:
http://www.advocatesfortheinnocent.com/fetalpain.html
Abortion Stories:
http://abortiontv.com/Words/truestoriesfrom-mothers.htm
http://www.abort73.com/HTML/I-G-2-testimony.html
http://www.teenbreaks.com/abortion/girlswhoaborted.cfm
Abortion Risks:
http://afterabortion.info/complic.html
http://www.abortionfacts.com/reardon/effect_of_abortion.asp
http://www.teenbreaks.com/abortion/complicationsgirls.cfm
Abortion Deaths:
http://www.lifedynamics.com/Pro-life_Group/Pro-choice_Women
http://www.afterabortion.info/news/abortiondeaths.html
http://www.lifeissues.org/ru486/deaths.htm
When Does Life Begin?
http://abort73.com/HTML/I-A-1-medical.html
Don't worry about the people who are insulting you. People know that abortion hurts women and kills babies, but they do not want to admit it. Write a good paper and get the truth out!
2007-02-13 11:03:33 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is an extremely touchy subject because it's one of those political issues where you have some very loud and incredibly opinionated people on both sides. So be careful what you research. And yes, you DO need to research this subject. That means going beyond what you find on the web or propaganda pamphlets. If it's the medical aspect that you want to report on, then research the medical procedures.
Also, grammatically speaking: 1) "has been said to performed" is incorrect, and 2) don't write your paper in the first or second person (no "I"s or "you"s).
2007-02-13 06:14:38 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
According to my studies one of ways of abortion has been performed by dilating the woman with a series of metal rods, that can cause the cervix to rip. Directly following that, a vacuum aspiration is placed inside the woman and the sound is described as a peircing sound. It is also said that the pain is so bad that it can make you scream and cry the entire time of the process.
2007-02-13 06:07:18 · answer #4 · answered by Torey♥ 5 · 1⤊ 2⤋
The first paragraph should usually be the opening paragraph and grab the readers attention. Don't start by asking a question too cliche. Your first paragraph should have a thesis, which means basically listing what you will talk about in the body. But don't go right out and say "I will be talking about......". Then you should have a few body paragraphs where in each paragraph you talk about one subject (ONLY ONE!! :)) then conclude. So maybe some topics for your paragraphs can be...
Steps of Abortion
Religious Aspects of Abortion
Aftermath of Abortion
Good Luck!
P.S. I would start over
2007-02-13 06:08:37 · answer #5 · answered by Bree 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
An abortion is the removal or expulsion of an embryo or fetus from the uterus, resulting in or caused by its death. This can occur spontaneously as a miscarriage, or be artificially induced by chemical, surgical or other means. Commonly, "abortion" refers to an induced procedure at any point during pregnancy; medically, it is defined as miscarriage or induced termination before twenty weeks' gestation, which is considered nonviable.
Throughout history abortion has been induced by various methods. The moral and legal aspects of abortion are subject to intense debate in many parts of the world.
for more information you can go to wikipedia, is the best place to find information .... good luck
2007-02-13 06:07:13 · answer #6 · answered by lady_morriganus 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
There are many crisis pregnancy centers available that can provide more information about the various medical procedures that are available.
You should also consider visiting a library and do some research before just putting some words on paper. Do your homework.
2007-02-13 06:05:40 · answer #7 · answered by Thomas K 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
First, since someone else wrote the exact paragragh you did, it seems that you didn't write it at all. Hint one: plagiarism is a bad idea. Two: pretending that you're writing a question to spout off about abortion and describe something ugly is rude and tacky.
Gal.
2007-02-13 06:16:29 · answer #8 · answered by Catalina 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You really need to take a course in creative writing or something. The paragraph is written very poorly which is probibly why you need to take it out. There is no way that I can fix this for you. You have 3 different thoughts in the same paragraph for one, which means you technically have 3 different paragraphs all crammed together.
2007-02-13 06:05:45 · answer #9 · answered by Gig 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
only because you get hit does no longer advise you'll have a miscarriage, I fell and this did not ensue, I did have a buddy who did later in being pregnant and she or he had a toddler nevertheless born (born useless) i presumed i replaced into having a miscarriage with my very last toddler, I had tremendous bleeding, I had to be hospitalized, it seems I had Placenta previa and that replaced into causing the bleeding, i'm particular you may google on-line spontaneous abortion or miscarriage and discover out more desirable.
2016-11-03 08:45:01 · answer #10 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would start by calling the local women's health centers in your area and getting information from them. They may also have pamphlets available for you, and probably can tell you a bunch of websites/books/articles that you could pick up at the library with reliable information in them.
Good luck.
2007-02-13 06:13:28 · answer #11 · answered by bttrflyfairytale 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋