keep it going. could be longer
2007-02-13 05:23:25
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answer #1
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answered by jjayferg 5
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Sweet Jesus that is a horrible poem! Robert Frost is rolling in his grave!
2007-02-13 13:24:18
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answer #2
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answered by Anonymous
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It would be too confusing for someone too young. Maybe if it was a little clear-er? Did you write it yourself or did you find it somewhere?
After all, it's all quite awesome.
Hope my advice worked out(even a little)
2007-02-13 17:19:35
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answer #3
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answered by LadyDragonRider 3
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LOL!!!! Sorry! its a nice awesome poem but what "the Genuis" said was halariouse. <--- spelled wrong
2007-02-13 13:30:27
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answer #4
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answered by qqq q 1
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it's cute, rhyming, and fresh like a spring day after rain
2007-02-13 16:01:43
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answer #5
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answered by flowerpet56 5
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I smell cheese
2007-02-13 13:22:45
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answered by sugacaney 2
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some girl that is not very nice and isn't very understanding
2007-02-13 13:25:16
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answered by Ma Baby 4
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Its poetic metaphor, what do you THINK it means?
2007-02-13 13:22:56
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answered by Anonymous
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looks good, i mean you could go long.
2007-02-13 13:22:43
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answered by stakchipz 2
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short and sweet, very nice..
2007-02-13 13:23:10
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answered by Lorene 4
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