I gaze in awe and breathless wonder,
This sky of stars our lives live under.
Beneath this canopy of shining jewels,
We play around and act like fools.
A silver stream eternal changing,
Starlit moon, so close comes ranging.
A blaze of fire across the sky,
And in my heart I wonder, why
As constellations spin and dance,
My eyes are held with gaze in trance.
But not upon those heavens yonder,
But on you ,
I gaze in awe and breathless wonder.
or should i write some thing else
2007-02-13 01:39:25 · 13 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
That is the most beautiful poem I have read in a long time. Use it and you will surely make her yours completely. =)
2007-02-13 01:58:19 · answer #1 · answered by Gabriele 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ok i'm an exceedingly mature woman and known congratulations on the poem that's fab yet very very darkish. If this female is comparable to you as in likes the darkness or is a gothic then she would be able to love this poem. If no longer then something common Like I wish i replace right into a bar or cleansing soap all heat on your hand and each and each time you will take a tub i'd see your promise land. Or Roses are purple Violets are Blue i actually such as you. Or G i admire you, G I do, G i'm hoping you are going to adore me too better of effective fortune!!!
2016-11-03 08:22:09 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful
2007-02-13 01:45:49 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Amazing!
2007-02-13 01:51:46 · answer #4 · answered by ♥Milkshake♥ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's wonderful! Anyone would be happy to recive that! 10/10
2007-02-13 01:44:41 · answer #5 · answered by tuxgal3 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Did you write that or steal it from someone else?
2007-02-13 06:11:40 · answer #6 · answered by ? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That' amazing! If you actually wrote that it's very good! =)
2007-02-13 01:55:25 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
aaah sweet - but is it yours Cyrano?
2007-02-13 02:13:09 · answer #8 · answered by Basket-santa 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow...it's awesome...trust me...I hate mushy stuff...but that's good.
2007-02-13 01:43:56 · answer #9 · answered by evilcharm1 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
WOW!! That is awesome!
2007-02-13 01:43:38 · answer #10 · answered by Urchin 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋