If you wouldn't mind, please post here. It is 5-6 pages long and if you comply, I will email it to you. I would just like to know if my paper makes sense to the common reader. Thank you :).
2007-02-12 12:40:21 · 5 answers · asked by Aly 3 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
I'll help...
You'll probably need my address...
It's hilrox1@sbcglobal.net
So you can send it to me or whatever...
2007-02-12 12:43:28 · answer #1 · answered by Flappy 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"Capone is one of the strongest symbols of collapse in law and order in the 1920’s prohibition era."
Try putting 'from' the 1920's... or something get rid of one of the 'in''s
Also when you said that Torrio moved to Chicago, and that he convinced his friend to have Capone work as the bartender you didnt state that, or when Capone moved to Chicago.
Is this a thesis paper? Or informative?
I liked it.
2007-02-12 12:43:06 · answer #2 · answered by Socrates 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Only because it's on Capone. That is if you do not already have enough opinions. bkfd202 @ yahoo
2007-02-12 14:22:36 · answer #3 · answered by bkfd202 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
@yahoo
2007-02-12 12:43:41 · answer #4 · answered by cop350zx 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes please email me
james_a_eiden@yahoo.com
2007-02-12 12:49:22 · answer #5 · answered by ? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋