Please help me.. I promise I wont claim it as my own or anything.. im just not very good at expressing my feeling and making it sound really REALLY good!
I need a poem that says how sorry I am for everything, how I want to make things better, how i want to be the one to make him happy, stuff like that... If you can make it really mushy gooshy but not childesh! Thanks so Much!
2007-02-12 12:28:29 · 9 answers · asked by greygirl06 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Marriage & Divorce
Many days and nights have passed
and I've wondered of my wrongs,
the hurtful words that I have spoken
the sorrow that I have caused.
I have seen the tears behind your eyes
have felt the heaviness in your heart,
and now I know the ache you feel
as I feel when we are apart.
I know now the knife I have used
as a dagger into your soul,
my own eyes cry without you here
this I want you to know.
I ask myself am I worthy
of the love you have to share,
I can only hope to make you smile
to have you close and near.
I know now what I have done
and I ask for one more chance,
please come home--be with me,
and let us plan our dance.
2007-02-12 12:50:19 · answer #1 · answered by moniquebell 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Reconciliation Poem
2016-10-18 02:32:37 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dear hubby,
I have been acting such a fool, for a long time
I realized my biggest treasure was you in my life
I am so truly sorry of not be submissive to you in everything,
And do see that you are my authority over me,
that God has designed our relationship
that you love me, provide, protect, and cherished me,
as I honor, respect, and submit to you in everything,
I want to be the wife that you so richly deserved,
I dont want us part from each other,
I am such a fool of letting you go like that, and my behavior has been selffish, selfcentered and not looking how I can be your helpmeet, I am truly sorry,
I hope that you can find forgiveness in your heart, to forgive me, and even to take me back as your wife, but dont take any junk from me, show me authority over me, and that I will agree to understand, that you will make all the final decisions.
Can you take such a stupid fool back, and let me show you how much I am willing to change to the woman you want and need.
I promise not to try to change you, and to work on me,
I love you always, and for what is worth, can we reconciled this difference we have, and be back husband and wife team!
your truly
Your wife
2007-02-12 12:39:22 · answer #3 · answered by ourjacobdavid 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
You know, it would mean so much more to him if it's just your words and your feelings. It doesn't have to be a poem, it just has to be from you and from the heart.
If it's from you... He'll know you really care. If it's from someone else, expect the 'that's nice' reaction.
Just sit down and write what you feel. It doesn't have to rhyme. It just as to be sincere.
2007-02-12 12:33:00 · answer #4 · answered by Lemar J 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Why are you taking all the blame for the seperation? It takes two to get along and it takes two to quarrel. You should just write a letter to him, from your heart. It does not have to rhyme, and would mean so much more to him, and also to you. Good luck.
2007-02-12 12:33:31 · answer #5 · answered by NAN G 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Hi my dear, just write what is in your heart. Sincerity is the most important ingredient in communication, Poetic words are only empty words without it. Tell him how much he means to you, how sorry you are for your past mistakes and how you would like to build a new future with him. Good luck.
2007-02-12 12:38:54 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful, and the word "ochre" depicts not only summer wheat nettles but sadness and death as well. "red blood, kin to ochre earth" would appear better, I think. Is the poem a translation? Then the correction is valid. Beautiful and original of the Aboriginal tribe, sad, tormented people of that land.
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2016-04-16 11:17:15 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Do you think all it will take is a Poem?
Get into action girl and go and PROVE to him you're sorry instead.
Get ready for the worst reaction and aim for the best reaction.
2007-02-12 12:33:01 · answer #8 · answered by Korndigger 1 · 2⤊ 0⤋
how about, i'll leave you alone to move on with your life because i cheated on you with chris from myspace?
2007-02-12 12:31:29 · answer #9 · answered by Dr. Barker 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋