Can I get a second opinion ?
I wrote a poem for this dude I like a lot and he wrote back and said I should keep my day job. What's wrong with him?
After Lunch
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Before lunch I was hungry and so I ate
Ate as in gobbled my food ...to brighten my day
Day starts for me after lunch
Lunch comes after a lonely morning
Morning ......then day...after lunch.
burp.
2007-02-12 09:55:01 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Cultures & Groups ➔ Lesbian, Gay, Bisexual, and Transgender
My God! To me it is the most exquisite love poem of all time.
2007-02-12 10:02:16 · answer #1 · answered by Kedar 7 · 10⤊ 1⤋
If you had a day job, you should have kept it.
In yon shallows lie nary the barest reflection of depth.
3 thumbs down? It's a meaningless piece of drivel. No humor, no insight, no sly inference, no irony, no nothing. Not even deliberately meaningless. Unless you compare it to a sudden and premature loss of rigidity.
Perhaps its purpose was to see how many of you fooled yourselves into some sort of a sycophantic driveling response.
2007-02-12 19:06:41 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 3⤋
You should keep your day job.
Yeah, nothing wrong with him. You should not spend time writing those ugly poem. You should focus on your work.
From your poem, I can see that you do nothing in the morning while people have done almost the whole day jobs. I don't know what to say, but from the poem, you seem to be a useless person. Sorry I have to say that.
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I am not gay, so maybe I could not understand you gay poem, but if everyone reads poem in the morning, they will not work. Your poem negatively affects to people.
2007-02-12 18:06:39 · answer #3 · answered by Henry 4 · 0⤊ 6⤋
Critics are angry people.
Maybe he hadn't had anything to eat when he sat down to your poem?
2007-02-12 18:55:29 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 4⤊ 0⤋
No, you totally misunderstood me!!! I said for you to keep your day job, so we could have our nights together!!!!!
2007-02-12 23:45:15 · answer #5 · answered by Tikhacoffee/MisterMoo 6 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Perhaps by showing us something that we don't get, you are inferring that you aren't getting any either.
2007-02-13 14:34:56 · answer #6 · answered by Grist 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Don't quit your day job.
2007-02-12 18:00:51 · answer #7 · answered by Martin Pedersen 6 · 4⤊ 1⤋
I love your poem... I wish you were my man so you can write me poems... such an inspiration.
toddles xoxo
2007-02-12 18:20:52 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 2⤋
You had me eating out of the palm of your hand...until the "burp".
2007-02-12 18:18:08 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 2⤋
well its not a very good poem maybe he thinks your tryin to be a poet
2007-02-12 18:01:57 · answer #10 · answered by j_man2444 1 · 3⤊ 3⤋