Help!!! is this a good Yu-Gi-Oh Deck?

Question

A Beast + Winged Beast Deck/1 Spellcaster

Monsters:
Star Monster - Dark Magician Girl
Flower Wolf
Siver Fang
Darkworld Thorns
Great Angus
Roc From The Valley Of Haze
Harpie lady 1
Harpie lady 2
Harpie lady 3
Queen Bird
Sonic Bird
Gazelle The King Of Mythical Beasts
Outstanding Dog Marron
Mother Grizzly
Giant Rat

(15) monsters

Magic Cards:
Soul Release
Ookazi
Remove Trap
Dark Hole
Swords Of The Revealing Light
Sogen
De-Spell
The Reliable Guardian
Monster Reborn
Change Of Heart

(10) Magics

Traps:
Enchanted Javelin
Ominous Fortunetelling
Magic Jammer
Wobaku
Rienforcements

(5) Traps

Hope Its Good,
I Tried My Best Making it.

Answer 1

put more time into it.you need tratagies and combos and i dont see that in here. you have some powerfull magic cards but im not to impressed with your monsters.you should buil your deck to one type or attribute.like make a beast deck or a winged beast deck.dont do both

Answer 2

Limit your monsters to a certain type like winged beast or beast unless you have a deck based on fusions that are different. If you want to make a spellcaster deck I suggest you buy the spellcaster deck at a store, take out a few spell and trap cards in it to replace with the pretty good lineup of spell and trap cards in the deck you posted, and use the dark magician girl in it. For the winged beast deck here is a good base for it:
3xharpie lady
3xharpie lady1
3xharpie lady 2
3xharpie lady 3
3x harpie's brother
3x harpie lady sisters
then add two more monster cards
spells:
3xelogant egotist
3xhapie's hunting grounds
icarus attack
mountain
2 more spells
TRAPS:
what you had in the posted deck + call of the haunted magic cylinder and 3 more trap cards
make sure you have 40 or more cards in your deck

Answer 3

Well you only have 29 cards in your deck. (flower wolf is a fusion, so it goes in the fusion deck) A deck is a min limit of 40 cards, so you'll need more. And with the cards you've listed, it doesn't seem like you have that many cards to choose from.

This is a decent beginner deck, once you add at least 11 more cards, but it won't do against any higher than that.

Answer 4

needs alot of work u could put more support for dark magician girl in cuz the way u have it now she will only be 2000 atk which is very easy to take down as for ur traps if u add eye of truth to it u will have a very easy way of taking life points when combined with ominous fourtune telling if u can find a mirrior force and magic cylinders it would be better. sogen can be replaced with raising air current to support ur wind monster which will make the harpies alot stronger putting them at 2100 with harpie lady 1 effect.

Answer 5

hey man its a good effort but in order to have a really strong deck you need some rare cards and if you are going to put harpie lady in your deck then you have to have more cards that support her like harpie pet dragon i think you if you wanr a powerful deck then you should make a spellcaster deck but anyway your deck is good but you need some monster with good effects silver fang is not good enough try looking at some other cards @ tcgplayer.com ok keep trying