(sing chorus)
:now your gone i don't see you anymore
:im here with out you by my side it makes my life a boreee
:I hang aroudn like there is nothein bothering meee
:but the truth is im here with out you baby
:baby come back to me oh whoooa come back to me baby come back to me
(rap verse 1)
:left here in the dark looking at you boy rips my heart apart
:It was so perfect our love was so true
:then i found out about her & you
:baby y? Y'd you have to do this to me it turned me so blue
:you hurt me once then you hurt me twice
:tell me baby when you gonna try & make things write
:I cried for days for house on end
:tell me baby where does a broken heart start to mend
:your love is what kept me going day too day & then all of a sudden your love had gone away
:we said it was gonna last always&forever but i gues we both sould of known a whole long better
(sing chorus) then (rap verse 2)
We went from being luvas to bein best friens
:oh damn i still wish it didn't have to
2007-02-12 08:37:16 · 12 answers · asked by CuTiE WiD A WhOle LoTtA Bo0ty 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
:damn i still wish it didn't have to end
:we call each other everynite to wish one anutha i love you with akiss goodnite
:you know mi deepest secrets & the dreams i want to acheive
:your the one the one that taught me to bleive
:i knew i loved you write from tha start & from that moment on you had my heart
:I gave you anutha chance cuz i thought you was real
:shoot i thought you & me was tighter then jack & jill
: it hurs so much more then you'll ever kno
:im sorry baby but i ain't ready to letchu go
*Chorus
2007-02-12 08:39:56 · update #1
So yea..this is my song called come back to me...i started writin poems then i took it to the next level I LOVE rap so i do rapz & songz put tagetther usually...Mi x cheated on me & it hurt me soooo bad & it still does & so yea i did this..I LOVE singin & its harder to say its good with out hearing the beat i wrote it with but its awesome when i sing with it...I hope you guy's enjoyd reading it
2007-02-12 08:43:16 · update #2
now your gone i don't see you anymore
:im here with out you by my side it makes my life a boreee
:I hang around like there is nothin bothering meee
:but the truth is im here with out you baby
:baby come back to me oh whoooa come back to me baby come back to me
(rap verse 1)
:left here in the dark looking at you boy rips my heart apart
:It was so perfect our love was so true
:then i found out about her & you
:baby y? Y'd you have to do this to me it turned me so blue
:you hurt me once then you hurt me twice
:tell me baby when you gonna try & make things write
:I cried for days for house on end
:tell me baby where does a broken heart start to mend
:your love is what kept me going day too day & then all of a sudden your love had gone away
:we said it was gonna last always&forever but i gues we both sould of known a whole long better
(sing chorus) then (rap verse 2)
We went from being luvas to bein best friends
:oh damn i still wish it didn't have to
It's very good! I almost get feeling from it, you wrote it for me.
It's exactly what I wanted to write, 3 years ago. enter it into a contest, and you might at least get 2nd place. I, too, write poems.
But I'd glady sell them for money, to someone who'd turn them into songs and share the credit with me.
2007-02-12 08:49:48 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Lyrically, it has substance. Find a tight beat and/ or cool producers to compliment it, and I'd say it would be a hit. Have you heard some of the garbage playing on the airways as we speak...lol Keep on keeping on!!!
2007-02-12 17:01:10 · answer #2 · answered by wonderfullyhuman_99 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You could be the next Dexie and the Midnight Runners
2007-02-12 16:39:49 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
honestly. To high school. Heard it all before. Spelling also might help. I'll give it a 2.
2007-02-12 16:40:47 · answer #4 · answered by ♥Amanda♥ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Pretty Good. I right songs myself. Good luck.
2007-02-12 16:39:40 · answer #5 · answered by blah blah blah! 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It depends on the beat
2007-02-12 16:39:36 · answer #6 · answered by Elly 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i think its excellent if u have any other songs then good luck on getting a cd! and i meant that as a complement!!!
2007-02-12 16:41:39 · answer #7 · answered by clever_and_cute101 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
very deep, i love it i think it is better than anyones today, you should really publish it, i write a little myself and i think it hits everyone, weve all felt it its great!
2007-02-12 16:40:49 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
As for the lyrics they are really good.
2007-02-12 16:40:51 · answer #9 · answered by Zack 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think its pretty good
2007-02-12 16:39:35 · answer #10 · answered by joe 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋