im gunna nick that and paste it!!!
sorry
ps its great!
2007-02-12 06:11:12
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answer #1
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answered by adrian h 1
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On Valentine’s Day we think of those Who we love dearly and hold close to our heart, Our special someone who we impose Love, care and affection onto We celebrate special memories spent together The laughter, the smiles, whatever the weather Of which I shall always remember For the last 17 months I have done so many things I thought I’d never achieve And im glad I’ve done these things with you. And you…there is so much I love about you, From your cheeky smile, to your kind personality And your loyalty that heals my insecurities You are my special someone, Someone who I can be myself around, Someone who is there for me when I’m down, And knowing that you care touches my heart I have grown as a person because of you, You have taught me how to love and what it feels like to be loved in return I love you with all my heart, And I love you, just the way you are Someone special Just a few changes I would do, but it's your poem, I really like it, it's from the heart feel free to take it or leave it man, Peace Alski K
2016-05-24 01:23:59
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answer #2
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answered by Victoria 4
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My Dear Alex
To me, you are the only man I have ever known
To me, you are the only man I could ever need
To me, you are the love of my life, my everything
And for that I love you
Without you I am nothing, as are you without me
Together we share many firsts, including love
And although you stand next in my heart, to the man above
We share the same unconditional Love
So for you, My Dear Alex
I can sit and say
that all good things, I wish to come your way
Especially on this Valentines Day.
2007-02-12 06:18:45
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answer #3
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answered by hotmama 3
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The only part that I do not care for is in the last verse when you are comparing him to God. I think that a better line would be...
We are showered in love from above.
Otherwise it is good, and it shows your boyfriend how you truly feel.
If you want to add another verse you could write one that says how much he completes you and makes you whole. And something to the fact that you can not envision your life without him in it
2007-02-12 06:22:59
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answer #4
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answered by Gary S 5
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Lucky Alex, very nice.
2007-02-12 06:17:45
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answered by twostories 4
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It made me feel so sad because Alex is boning your best friend ... sorry to break it to you this way.
2007-02-12 07:18:05
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answered by hondo_civicson 2
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Do you have another one....just in case?
2007-02-12 06:17:27
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answered by Anonymous
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You dont know what you would do without him & he dont know what to do without his candy?lol
2007-02-12 06:12:08
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answered by Anonymous
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What's his opinion?
2007-02-12 06:14:17
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answered by Myndlynd T 2
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I think it's good!
2007-02-12 06:15:20
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answered by tinkerbell82 3
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