Is this a good Thesis Satement fo rBarabbas by Par Lagerkvist?

Question

In the novel Barabbas by Par Lagerkvist, faith is a belief that doen't rest alone on logical or material evidence.

Answer 1

it might read better if you spell out "does not" and move "alone" to the end of the sentence.

"In the novel Barabbas by Par Lagerkvist, faith is a belief that does not rest on logical or material evidence alone."

also make sure that you explain why faith does not rest on logical or material evidene in the body of your paper and that you have touched on your main points in your thesis statement.

hope this helps!

Answer 2

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