anybody can continue this paragraph up to four and then finish the story?
Its summer, I'm at the beach laying in the sun, trying to forget my past, then he comes, a boy I thought I would never see again, he tells me he loves me and that he has always loved me, I can feel his words, precious gems, inside me filling the cracks in my soul and mending my broken heart ............
2007-02-11
14:28:11
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will you continue this for me please up to four paragraph for me? i need help
2007-02-11
14:44:40 ·
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He leans forward and I feel his hot breathe on me and it electrifies me. I close my eyes in anticipation and then....
I awoke with a start. I look around my room taking in every detail. the light from the street casts an eerie shadow on my wall. I glance at the alarm clock. God its only 3:15 in the morning. I feel something moving at my feet. I tug on my blanket to reveal Nibbles,my faithful cat. He eyes me suspiciously, yawns and lays his head down. "you'll always love me wont you?" I get up and walk to my window. The rain is coming down pretty hard. I breathe onto the window and trace his name and watch the drops of condensation trickle down. I fight back the tears and swallow the lump in my throat as whisper his name. "Michael,I miss you and will always love you" Then the memories of the accident come flooding into my mind, haunting me, torturing my very soul
2007-02-11 14:46:41
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answered by molly 6
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then all of the sudden... Slam! It hits me. I was hurt before and he did it. WHY should I believe him now? He is out only to hurt, kill or destroy. I freeze. He notices my countinance and sort of backs up a half step.
He gives me a look of disbelief then starts his bull again. I stick the palm of my hand toward his seductive looking face. "You are taking to someone who has been there done that" "Just stop before you sound any more rediculus" Then I turn, gather my things... I make sure he checks out my attributes leaving him standing in the sand. And boy did I enjoy that day!
2007-02-11 14:41:14
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answered by chattanooga chip 3
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... but I knew he was just using my weakness for him against me. In losing him, I had found my true love, and learned I did not have to "settle". His words were like honey... for a moment I was weak. He saw the hole in my defenses, and kissed me. I felt nothing. Nothing at all. It was like kissing thin air. I knew then that even though the little girl in me would always remember him, the woman in me could not let myself give up the true love I have for the false love this boy offered. I hugged him. I told him I loved him. And I said goodbye for the last time, as I walked away from my vapid past, and into the arms of my promising future.
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answered by Anonymous
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I start to listen to his words, but, off in the distance, something catches my eye.
A very beautiful woman, almost supermodel in presence, seems to be milling about, drawing circles in the sand with her toe and occasionally looking in our direction with a furtive glance
2007-02-11 14:33:19
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answered by Anonymous
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suddenly I realize that this is a man I'm talking to. I jump up from my towel and ask him why he is hitting on me. He tells me he loves the look of my speedo. "Damn". I say. This happens to me every time.
2007-02-11 14:31:36
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answered by Nagitar™ 7
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repairing each tiny tear as gentle as can be and turning the blackness into hope.
2007-02-11 14:32:41
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answered by SK8TERGURL~1~NOT~ 2/davesslave 6
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Yes I can. Don't you mean, "Will you continue this paragraph?"
2007-02-11 14:37:11
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answered by ? 4
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and our two souls unite and will never be pulled apart.
2007-02-11 14:36:38
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answered by Johnny 5
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when suddenly I am awakened by sound of my own snoring.
2007-02-11 14:32:52
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answered by Anonymous
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