“My Mother, My Friend”
I tried to be all I could be.
The best person, your daughter, just me.
So many summers have passed,
It is truly hard to believe how it has gone by so fast.
I am you, through and through.
You are my mother, this is true.
There has not been a moment you haven’t been by my side
Comforting me with your soothing voice as I cried.
I know sometimes I have not done my best.
In the end, I do have to admit, I am really blessed.
I do not know what I will do when that day comes.
That will be the moment when I am completely stiff, numb.
There is not anything in this would I would not do for you.
Together, you and I simply stick together like glue.
Full of hope, generousness, and trust,
You were the one I could run to for my first lust.
Hurtful words have been said I know
But with you I was never forced to put on a show.
Honest and true,
No where in this world can anyone find a mother like you.
2007-02-11 10:40:14 · 11 answers · asked by Brittany 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
Well I am at a loss for words. That was the most beautiful poem I have read in a while. You should have it copy written and published on a card. Your mom would really be proud. Keep on writing.
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2016-11-03 04:37:58 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's beautiful!! Your mother will love it, it may make her cry though because it nearly made me cry. And I'm not even YOUR mother!! But I am a mother so I am sure that she will love it.
2007-02-11 10:51:41 · answer #3 · answered by Donna J 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is a very beautiful poem. You are truly a great daughter, and i got to learn from you. :)
PS. It is generosity instead of generousness.
God bless you.
2007-02-11 10:58:29 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Keep a kleenex handy for your Mom(probably one for yourself too). I can't imagine any mother not being proud of that! Well done.
2007-02-11 10:46:48 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
I think it was extremely good it brought tears into my eyes. I hope you read that to your mom it was very sweet.
2007-02-11 10:44:29 · answer #6 · answered by HatersEnvyMe 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
it's really nice! i bet she'd cry b/c of it! my mom would. i like the rhyming thing. for some reason, i can NOT get rhymes on my poem. hahah. lucky you.
2007-02-11 10:44:24 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Wonderful. Your mom will probably cry. And she should keep it forever.
2007-02-11 10:55:23 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
this is a really really nice poem!!!!! i like it alot and i'm sure your mother is going 2 like it too..!!!
2007-02-11 10:44:48 · answer #9 · answered by christel s 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
She will love it
2007-02-11 10:47:42 · answer #10 · answered by okieandlovinit 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋