Please CORRECT the sentences.?

Question

Please CORRECT these sentences and tell me if anything is wrong or if it make sense.

1. I have many personalities that best describes me, especially ambitious and sympathetic.

2. My favourite animal is cats.

3. I have six aunts and Raye is the youngest.

4. You always have to be ready for all the challenges you go through.

Answer 1

1. I have many qualities that best describe me, especially beeing ambitious and sympathetic.
2. My favorite animals are cats. (Favourite if your british or something)
3. I have six aunts and Raye is the youngest aunt.
4. You always have to be ready for all the challenges that you go through.

I think these answers are right, but I'm not sure... I'm not GREAT at grammar.

Answer 2

1. I have many personalities which best describe me. Especially ambitious and sympathetic.

2. My favourite animal is the cat.

3. I have six aunts, of which Raye is the youngest.

4. You have to be ready for all the challenges you go through.

Answer 3

1. I have many personal traits that best describe me, especially ambitious and sympathetic.

2. My favorite animals are cats.

3. I have six aunts, and Raye is the youngest aunt.

4. You should always be ready to face challenges that lie ahead.

Answer 4

1. Ambitiousness and sympathy are the traits that best describe my personality.

2. Cats are my favorite animal.

3. Raye is the youngest of my six aunts...or...Of my six aunts, Raye is the youngest.

4. You should always be prepared to meet any challenge.

Answer 5

1. I have many personality traits that best describe me, two being ambitious and sympathetic.

2.My favorite animals are cats.
3.I have six aunts, my aunt Raye being the youngest.
4.You always have to be ready for challenges that approach you.

Answer 6

1. I have many personalities that best DESCRIBE me, especially ambitious and sympathetic. (Apart from grammar, which now is correct, it has a meaning trouble. "I have quite a lot of /chosen some... personal traits that best Describe me, especially my ambition and showing sympathy to others" would be fine with me. If you have many personalities, it is like you have different characters=sets of characteristics, and you only want to mention characteristics. Also, you cannot have many personal traits/personalities that best describe you and then choose two to define yourself).
2. This can be right, although I prefer "My favourite animal is cat". I googled it and, for British-spellers,
"My favourite animal is cat" 96 results.
"My favourite animal is the cat". 44 results.
"My favourite animal is a cat". 71 results.
"My favourite animal is cats". 78 results
"My favourite animal is the cats" 0 results (obviously)
"My favourite animals are cats". 662 results (also grammatically correct)
"My favourite animals are the cats". 1 result.
3. I would suggest "I have six aunts and Raye is the youngest one/ the youngest of all /the youngest of them all." (stating to whom/what you compare is preferable)
4. You always have to be ready for all the challenges you go through. (or... the challenges you have to/will/are to/may go through. I prefer the last two alternatives -make more sense to me. And now that I think about it... go through... face/deal with sounds better).

Answer 7

1) I have many characteristics that describe me well, including ambition and sympathy. (personality is the combinations of all characteristics, best doesn't really work in this sentence, and you change tenses at the end.)
2) My favorite animals are cats. (cats is plural, so therefore you need a pluralized verb)
3) I have six aunts; Raye is the youngest. (conjuction is unnecessary to combine to complete sentences. you need a type of punctuation between the two.)
4) You always have to be ready for all the challenges you will come across. (don't know reason, i just know that it's wrong the way you had it.)

Answer 8

I have many personality traits which best describe me, most especially ambitious and sympathetic.
Cats are my favourite animal.
Raye is the youngest of my six aunts.
You must be ready for all the challenges you face.

Answer 9

1. describe me best; -- instead of.. that best describe me,
2. Favourite should be favorite. Also, instead of my favorite animal is cats.. it should be my favorite animals are cats.
3. comma before and , specify who Raye is..an aunt??
4. You always should be ready for the challenges you might face.

Hope I helped.. I take English one, and I am really good at writing!!

Answer 10

1. I have many traits which describe my personality. Among them are ambition and empathy. (unless you are psychotic, you have only one personality with many traits. Empathy is a trait, sympathy is a feeling.)

2.My favorite animal is the (domestic, wild, Siamese) cat.

3.I have six aunts, the youngest of whom is Raye.

4. One should always be ready to meet life's challenges.