Ok. i need to figure out how to end this poem. its called "One Wish". so far, it goes like this:
If you had one wish,
What would it be?
Would you wish to save the ones you love?
Or to save all the heavens up above?
Would you wish for all the pain to leave?
Or for the ones you love to not deceive?
Would you wish to never die?
Or to never have to lie?
Would you wish the never be sad?
Or to never be mad?
Would you wish to never have to cry?
Or to never have to try?
this is where i need help. i need a way to end this poem that "fits" the poem. any suggestions im taking. i will choose the best answer to whoever i think has the best ending. thanx!!
2007-02-11 09:30:37 · 14 answers · asked by Pete_Wentz_fanatic 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
note, i am NOT looking for wat YOU would wish for. or another line for the "Would you wish/Or would you" thing. im looking for a creative way 2 end the poem.
2007-02-11 09:40:12 · update #1
If I had one wish that would come true
My wish my dear would be to have you.
2007-02-11 09:39:29 · answer #1 · answered by So_many_questions 3 · 0⤊ 2⤋
for my section I write narrative poems and additionally like writing poems with extremely an emphasis on the top. A poem is nearly a ballet overall performance : you frequently remember the start and could remember the top...if the whole overall performance became astonishing however the ending fell aside...you will remember the overall performance as detrimental. So placed sufficient attempt on your end as you do on your beginning.
2016-09-28 23:36:25 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Would you wish the never be sad?
Or to never be mad?
Would you wish to never have to cry?
Or to never have to try?
So I wish upon wish for the end of wishing.
The emptiness of thoughts lie missing.
I gather myself and shake the guise.
and gently drift into the skies.
2007-02-11 09:38:21 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
Or would you put your wish away -
And save it for a rainy day?
2007-02-14 10:33:18 · answer #4 · answered by Moira 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
For many that wish is just to live,
Enjoy each moment and the people their with.
2007-02-11 09:47:42 · answer #5 · answered by Guy M 3 · 0⤊ 2⤋
I would wish for the ones that I love
And if sincere, will soar to the heavens up above.
2007-02-11 09:36:37 · answer #6 · answered by heather h 5 · 0⤊ 2⤋
but, if you had just one wish
would you wish to wish at all?
2007-02-11 09:35:39 · answer #7 · answered by chikki250 1 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Try this ending:
When I wish for a helping hand,
The end of my arm is where my eyes would land.
Please do your own work. Thank you.
2007-02-11 10:18:08 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 3⤋
Life will teach you soon to see,
That all you wish won't always be...
2007-02-11 10:32:29 · answer #9 · answered by Gordon B 4 · 2⤊ 1⤋
Do you wish you could fly? Or you can hide?
2007-02-11 09:44:47 · answer #10 · answered by kittyluverpr 2 · 0⤊ 2⤋