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can you plz help i need to right a pome for english the subject is about suiside

2007-02-11 05:20:49 · 11 answers · asked by asem a 1 in Arts & Humanities Books & Authors

11 answers

For starters, make sure you spell correctly. Write is not r-i-g-h-t unless you are trying to distinguish between left and right. Check out poetry.com. I think they have some hints and pointers!

2007-02-11 05:30:08 · answer #1 · answered by cleanmomma 2 · 1 0

There are many different structures to poems. Free Verse is the easiest to write and you can either rhyme or not, its your choice. I would go with that. Here's an example of a free verse poem I wrote:

Morning ----- the title if you didn't get that

The blue sky brightens.
The yellow sun wakes up.
The twinkling stars start to fade.
The full moon goes away.

The only criteria I had for this poem was it had to be 4 lines and only 4 lines, so you can do as many lines as you like.

2007-02-11 13:32:12 · answer #2 · answered by Kimi 4 · 0 0

Somtimes I just wish I was dead,
I have strange thought misting in my head.
Many times I've picked up knife,
I thought "This thing could take my life."
I talked to a doctor in Delaware,
He shook his head and gave a great stare.
When I jumped out a third floor window into the air.
Now, from a hospital bed,
I think no one is better off dead.

I'm young soo......might not be to good but I tried. =)

2007-02-11 14:11:55 · answer #3 · answered by Ostrich 2 · 0 0

''WHY" a poem finds it's lyrics is HOW a poem is written..Emerson explained it well... a poem is .."a thought so passionate and alive, like a spirit of a plant or an animal, it has an architecture all it's own, and adorns all nature with a new thing,"
Poets are intimate thinkers, poems are a hearts language, and all who ponder his expressions with him become the richer for his fortune.

2007-02-11 13:50:29 · answer #4 · answered by olddogwatchin 5 · 0 0

well.. remember all poems don't have to rhyme..
you could do that you could just do free verse.. w/e
just use some nice adjectives..
ones that suggest pain, sorrow, emptiness,
reasons why someone might die
then include how they die..
pulling the trigger.. w/e [if you want]
but don't make it too vulgar.. or too obscene..
I also recommend spell check and a thesaurus to help..
and that's all I think I can say without giving too much of my own works away..

2007-02-11 13:31:47 · answer #5 · answered by xxsilentxcriesxx 2 · 0 0

How about writing a poem and using spell check?

2007-02-11 13:29:08 · answer #6 · answered by L J 5 · 0 0

Roses are Red Violets are Blue this is a poem I hope it helps you.

2007-02-11 13:28:41 · answer #7 · answered by Mimi 6 · 0 0

A haiku yes.

I am really nice (5 syllables)
You need an answer to this (7 syllables)
I have it right now (5 syllables)

there..simple, aint it?

2007-02-11 13:24:30 · answer #8 · answered by Eating Rainbows For Food 2 · 0 0

I think you want to WRITE a poem!

2007-02-11 14:02:34 · answer #9 · answered by newyorkgal71 7 · 0 0

Weel u strt out by lerning to spk englsh...

2007-02-11 13:28:27 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

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