I love you with all of my heart
For today is a special day
That we both express our love for each other
In many different ways
Since we've been together
I've never felt so alive
I know in my heart, that without you
I could not survive
We've never argued
We've never lied
We hold together
The love inside
I will always love you
I hope that you see
That in my eyes
You're the only one for me
*Side Note* This is my first poem that I've actually written in a long time (I did one in like 4th grade) I'm not really the poetic type but since its valentines day I want to give my girlfriend a poem since she write them all the time and she wouldn't expect me to write her one :)
2007-02-10 19:19:55 · 7 answers · asked by devilmaycry42 2 in Society & Culture ➔ Holidays ➔ Valentine's Day
uhh..pretty simple..but not bad
its the thought that counts
2007-02-10 19:52:19 · answer #1 · answered by dbzsnowboarder 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
HAHA! think you are fishing for compliments.
If not, then yes it is basically a good one, especially if the poem was sincerely written by you.
2007-02-11 03:28:07 · answer #2 · answered by Kiosk 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Great effort. You are able to express, you truly love her.thats what females expect.It will be a costly gift for her.
2007-02-11 03:31:16 · answer #3 · answered by Syed A 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Terrible. Is that the same one you wrote in 4th grade?
2007-02-11 03:27:30 · answer #4 · answered by azhat 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
um... u see about poetry.. different ppl have different taste, so art and poetry is not always the best thing.. but if u r sure she will like it, then its good, because it is sincere
2007-02-11 06:44:12 · answer #5 · answered by deshriukas 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
GORGEOUS!
As long as she loves it, you're fine =D
She'll love the effort you put into it.
2007-02-11 03:28:39 · answer #6 · answered by x-adorkable 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
very cute
2007-02-11 03:23:08 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋