please help me .................please?

Question

Please, help me do draft this letter...............
i am only 15

Dear Sara

We want to Tems and got this all pictures. Dindo buys lots of gifts. Riany also broughst lot of hand items. It was a funny days for all of us. Lots of people all around us and we find a fair which will be continue of the middle of this month. Peoples are very good in Temes.
You can take lot of pictures from there. Oh, there , is 2 museum. But that will not make you happy if you too good in history. Keep in touch and let me know what you think about the pictures.


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thanks

Answer 1

Here I'll revise what you have so far:

Dear Sara,

We went to Tom's and got all of his pictures. Dindo bought lots of gifts. Ryan also bought lots of gifts too. We all had a fun day. There were lots of people and we found a fair which will be there until sometime in the middle of this month. The people are nice at Tom's. You can take a lot of pictures there. Oh. There are also two museums, but they aren't too fun if you know a lot about history.

Stay in touch and tell me what you think about the pictures.

Answer 2

dont get it. try again.