plzz can any one who likes writing help me with this quickly?

Question

ok i need a simple essay about something that happened to you that u can really remember includes some of the scenes like touching or smelling or smelling (u can make out one)....plz make it as detailed as posible...the best answer will have 10 points..thx!

Answer 1

Oh, no you don't. I'm not going to write something for you.

But it's not that hard...you can do it! Think of a really powerful experience, one that affected you on a lot of levels. Like, say, if you went to the beach. What did you see? What did you smell? What did you eat? What did you hear? Were there animals, plants, people, water, sky? Was it sunny or cloudy? How did the weather feel--could you feel it on your skin? What clothes were you wearing? Were you comfortable, or too hot, or too cold?

Just answer all the questions in some kind of order--pretend you're telling it to someone who's never done what you did. How would you make that person experience it like you did?

It's OK to be stumped, but it's not OK to have somebody else do your work. I promise, it'll be much better if you do this yourself. It sounds hokey, but it's amazing to write something that makes somebody else feel exactly what you felt.

Learn to love writing as much as I do--it's worth the trouble!

Good luck and do your homework!

Answer 2

I remember back five years ago when I was with my brother who had just told me some great news. he was getting married ! The exhilaration rushed down my spine , I can still feel it even till this day.

He didn't want to break the news too soon, but he did, and wanted to know if I would help him pick out a Marriage ring, because there was just three months until he would have this new partner in his life. I agreed to go help him out in finding a ring for a reasonable price, but I had to do some other stuff at the moment so I was only open till 9 P.m. He agreed that I could pick him up at the time so I did.
When it was just an hour before it was time to go with my brother, I remember how i smelled love in the world, and how lonely I felt without it. I Could literally try and touch my heart and feel a huge hole in it. I could feel the hole being filled in, at least not by me, but my brother, who would soon to find true happiness in his life.

9 P.M came, and me and my brother went out of town looking for "THE" ring. Hours passed and we hadn't found anywhere decent. We decided to go out of town and look around. We stopped at this dark alley which didn't even look like a place of civilization, but there was a jewlery store close by.

All of a sudden, after me and my brother had gotten out of the car , a car had rushed by and all I heard was about 10 loud shots coming from every direction. The next thing I knew the car had sped off, and I could smell the blood of my brother laying across the road. He had been shot..........

Three days later my little brother had died in Dougstan Hospital on May 9, 1998. I didn't know what was worse, the fact that my little brother had died such a painful death, or the fact that the person who he loved had been cheating on him with another man for 5 months, and has already married as well.

This is a story about me and what I learned about life, do not trust anyone at all, and listen to your true instincts.

Answer 3

no one is going to sit here and right an essay in this little box I enjoy writing and would pobably consider helping you but I am in my 40's and anything i write about you teacher is going to know you did not experience it your self I would be glad to advise you

Answer 4

Maybe you should go on-line and PAY FOR someone to cheat for you.

Why do you expect someone to cheat for you for 10 points?

What nerve!

Answer 5

I would help you but i think you want it for homework. If i did do that For you it'd be about the car acident i was in..

Answer 6

Don't plagiarize.

Answer 7

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