to start a COMEDY story with:
once upon a time..okay wait, that's too normal and corny. Um...it was a dark and----okay that's bad too...well my name is maddy, read my story, because you know you want too.
and then it goes on...(it's a tween teenish book)
2007-02-10 08:13:26 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
Yeah, I like that...maybe say "...it was a dark and stormy" rather than leave the stormy out because otherwise someone might not get it. But I liked it.
2007-02-10 08:22:06 · answer #1 · answered by Kristie 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Yeah! Ilike it! Sounds like it's gonna be a good book.
2007-02-10 18:21:03 · answer #2 · answered by sketch_r 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it sounds good except for the "because you know you want to" part. just putting a period after "read my story" will leave a more dramatic effect.
2007-02-10 16:18:37 · answer #3 · answered by Samantha 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
yes I think that's fine
2007-02-10 16:17:37 · answer #4 · answered by Myglassesarealwaysclean 5 · 0⤊ 2⤋