The movement was a call for ------- pride and initially did not accept the idea of a violent resistance as the many ------- activists who had since the massacre.
Is there anything wrong with this sentence or can i leave it
2007-02-10 07:30:51 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
The movement was a call for pride, and initially the participants did not accept the idea of a violent resistance. However, many who became activists after the massacre called for violent retaliation.
2007-02-10 08:51:44 · answer #1 · answered by Emily A 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
What in the world does this mean? It doesn't say what you want it to.
The movement was a call for pride. It initially did not accept the idea of violent resistance as had many activists since the massacre.
2007-02-10 15:35:39 · answer #2 · answered by Cindy W 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your idea isn't clear to me. Here are my thoughts.
The movement was a call for ------- pride and initially did not accept the idea (who did not accept the idea?--not the movement, maybe members of the movement) of a violent resistance as the many ------- activists who had since the massacre (as the many activists who had what? accepted? not accepted? or something else?)
2007-02-10 15:36:41 · answer #3 · answered by happygirl 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
"activists who had since the massacre." should read "who did since the massacre".
2007-02-10 15:40:04 · answer #4 · answered by Aadel 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Take a risk!!
2007-02-10 15:57:28 · answer #5 · answered by brain_box 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
up urs
2007-02-10 15:39:15 · answer #6 · answered by IgotDaAnswersRightHere 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋