what can u say bout this?

Question

Chorus:
O Lei, O La, can somebody hear me say
O Lei, O La, can you really hear me when I say
O Lei, O La...
O Lei, O La, means I love you

From the day that I set my eyes on you
I really didn't expect that I would feel this way for you
Try to deny it but it feels so true
To be lovin' you

Repeat Chorus

Everytime I see you makes my dull day bright
Wanna come to you and tell you oh it feels so right
But I'm afraid that you won't let me be the girl by your side

Repeat Chorus


Bridge:

I try to hold back
Tryin' to get things right
But everytime I try to do that it makes my heart melt away
It hurts inside
To see that I'm not the one by your side
The pain is killing me away
Cause I wanna tell you how i'm feelin' inside

Repeat Chorus twice

means I love you... yeah
means I love you.. oh...
O Lei, O La, means I love you






i was the one who composed it

to cope_acetic:

i would love to but i am an asian i they say that asians will have hard time in passing...

and to all



thanks a lot!

Answer 1

amazing, cause am into composing rap songs and this is brillant contact me and we could write a song together ma addy is [e-mail]

Answer 2

There are a couple things about the composition of the song, it's very reminiscent of the beatles even with out a "key" that it's to be sung in.

But it is a good song on paper. Something worthwhile to move to preproduction. It's a "happy" song.

Answer 3

American Idol is looking for songwriters, and the contestants will be singing the songs.
Go to americanidol.com to find out how to submit yours.


Why not try anyway? "THEY" are often wrong!
It could be your ticket to wealth & fame.

Answer 4

oh my gosh...props
i can't write like that, it must be for someone special hey?

P.s...ever thought of becoming a composer?

Answer 5

Not bad

Answer 6

impressive

Answer 7

that was good seriously niceeeee :)

Answer 8

NICE

Answer 9

That is awesome!!!!!!