I cry out in dispair.
You come running,
arms open
ready to protect me
from the world.
If only you knew,
its myself I need protection from.
2007-02-10 01:43:22 · 17 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
Sounds like you need to talk to mum and dad...If you cannot do this face to face then you sure can..in your writing ability !!....It is good to write everything down as in feelings and emotions, it brings out your deepest purest thoughts that you cannot say, face to face...I like your poem but urge you to "speak" to someone close.........good luck..stay healthy and happy.
2007-02-10 01:52:26 · answer #1 · answered by ozzy chik... 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice poem!
But the overwhelming angstiness suggests you need a therapist.
2007-02-10 09:51:17 · answer #2 · answered by longnosedquoll 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Awesome. It sounds like an Evenesence song.
2007-02-10 09:49:09 · answer #3 · answered by Jim F 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
My heart went out to you as I read your poem. It is my prayer that you will discover what the psalmist discovered, as he said of the Lord, "The LORD is my rock, my fortress and my deliverer;
my God is my rock, in whom I take refuge.
He is my shield and the horn of my salvation, my stronghold" (Psalm 18:2)
2007-02-10 09:56:09 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like that poem. u did a great job. are you really a poet or you just do it as an outlet
2007-02-10 12:36:28 · answer #5 · answered by Dogdiggedydoo 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's what co-habitiveness is all about, but it's a very good poem!!
2007-02-10 09:47:07 · answer #6 · answered by THE Jester 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really LOVE your poem. It reveals the inner you.
2007-02-10 12:55:18 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it, but it sounds like you need someone to talk to and a hug.
2007-02-10 09:48:46 · answer #8 · answered by dardarzene 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I'm moved.
Some suggestions:
First line: despair
Seventh line: it's.
2007-02-10 09:51:50 · answer #9 · answered by tranquil 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats good
better than mine
hahah mine dont even make sence
2007-02-10 12:42:43 · answer #10 · answered by ok.sureletsgowiththat 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋