How do I REPLY this POEM… as ROMATIC or as PASSIONATE as possible? Any POET to help, please?

Question

My bf made this poetry for me:

“If life allows me
But one insanity
Let it be my Love
My crazy Love for you

And should I lose my life
In a moment, in an instant
Let me be filled forever
By you, sweet you…”

I want to reply this poet, but I’m not that good at writing poetry… my poet friend told me that to make a good poetry; I just need to follow my heart and just write it down. Still, I can’t get it. Why can my bf and his sister easily create romantic poem while I can’t? Any qualified poet to help and advice, please?


PS: I really DO love my bf!! ;)

Answer 1

well,im no qualified poet,but ive written something for you,as you can see it starts off as if it were in response to what your boyfriend had written. hope you like it :


Let insanity engulf us both,
My lover, forever,you have my oath,
And if, in an instant you ceased to be,
A life without you,i just could not see ,
Alone,sad,empty inside,
My heart in pieces,eyes never dry,
No reason for waking,my dreams full of you,
A lesson in love, and people,its true,
Cherish your lover, cos very few do,
If it were cruelly snatched away, there'd be so little you could do .

Answer 2

Hey i am not poet i am just teenager 14 years old and i know how to write a poem and what are the problems facing writing a poem.You may call it ROMANTIC or A POEM FOR YOU(i.e. sweet you ,dont take me in the wrong way).Hey this poem is nice.As your poet friend said, you just need to follow your heart and feel the feelings on the topic which you are writing.First write rough copy of what you are feeling in side your heart and then drive your poem from the rough copy.Here's some tip
1.To get some inspiration read some short poem of great writers like
William Wordsworth,
Robert Frost.
2.While reading the poem understand the Rhythm of the words in the poem.
3. Understand the very meaning of every word and try to feel the feelings of the poet.
I hope this will help you to write nice poem's to your BF

If you need any tips and have any doubt ask me.Don't hesitate to ask me.This is my E-mail Id : [e-mail]


I really like helping lovers.

Answer 3

If you are looking for more inspiration,go to poetry.com It has thousands of poems to view all written by amature poets. It's also where they hold monthly and daily poetry contests, for anybody to participate. The other web site is poet's .com thyey maybe able to give you more help through their forums. All types professional and amature ready to help you with your"writers block"

Answer 4

you can't just write it down. some people have a talent of poetry, others dont. in my family, my dad writes great poems, and i write good poems. the rest of my family just inspires us. the dont have the talent to do poetry. if you arent good at poetry that just means that you have another great talent to replace it.

Answer 5

No i don't think so ... they might remember what it's all about but not evey line of every poem