My friend has a story and i want to see if anyone likes it, here it is!
X, Chapter One, Samuri War.
" Archer's to the left! " You heard your captain, Anad Rutalan, Scream. " Yes Sir " Another soldier screamed, yelling for Anad's archers to fire. " Hatchi Zhadow, Go for the Scroll Of Yanya " He screamed as you took out your double ninja blades, And slicing a near by Hakari Ninja. " Yosang, You go with him! " Anad Screamed and threw your fellow partner, Yosang, A long staff with a steel ball on the end, and a pouch of needles....
Finished! It's all he has, The rest will be better and have action and romance he says, Up coming characters are, Sahari- Hatchi Zhadow's Brother, Yokain- A misterious demon/ninja mircinary. Nara-A demon that is traped within Hatchi's Long Blade. Itcara- A bladesman that helps Hatchi, Yeeran- A bowman that helps Hatchi, Icaris- Hatchi's pet panther, Hollow- A fire demon, Yukiza- A wind demon, Seeth- A water demon, Archan-A earth demon, MORE DEMONS TO COME!!
2007-02-09 07:31:07 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Comics & Animation
umm not to be rude but this his method of writing a story isnt all that good. this sounds like someone talking out loud while playing a samurai game and he couldn't even spell "samurai" right
2007-02-09 07:40:22 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
well it could be improved and seems alot like the martial arts film hero
2007-02-09 07:34:41 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
NICENICENICENICENICENICENICENICENICENICE!!!!!!
2007-02-09 07:42:19 · answer #3 · answered by Fat guy 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ok...............................i'm already lost.
2007-02-09 07:34:21 · answer #4 · answered by SinisterKid 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋