Can someone help me out with a poem or something to write in my boyfriends valentines day card?

Answer 1

One thing you could do to personalise your greeting is to use the letters in his name as the 1st letter of your verse, or use the same letters to describe his qualities and attributes. For example, my other half is called Phil and I sent him a rhyme that was something like "P is for Perfect, you're my kind of guy, H is for Happy, the way you make me feel, I is for Ideal, you're the man for me, L is for Loving, that's what you are to me." I did his surname in the same way. It doesn't necessarily have to rhyme, but it gives it a personal touch.

Answer 2

i think first you should text him in the moring before you meet and text him this 'I am opening an emotional bank account for u sweetheart,so deposit your love in it and you will get the interest' or use this one
'When u feel alone just look at the spaces between ur fingers remeber that in those spaces u can c my fingers locked with urs 4ever!!!'

and the poem you should use i think is this one, the one that i got ages ago
Is it really love?
or is it just a passing feeling
am I not convinced?
a bit uncertain of the feeling

Is it the way you make me feel?
so warm with joy and laughter
or could it be the happiness
from moments spent together

The lasting bliss, the kiss I miss,
The sweetest thoughts without a touch
The heart that hurts and bears a scar
thinking how far away you are

You're on my mind most of the day
And at night I go to bed and pray
An angel soft and gentle as you
Would make my sweetest dreams come true

Thinking about you alone or in class
Writing your name on my bathroom window glass
Wishing you were here
To love hold and care
Wishing I had you with me
To cherish and to stare

Into your soft and beautiful eyes
As we both travel to the skies
And mingle with the stars above
But is it really love?

Answer 3

I wouldn't put anything on paper to give him because he is already doing that for you. It also sounds like his work would "outshine" yours, which there is nothing wrong with that, but your poem would probably be a little diminished just because it is the same gift as his. Try for something else maybe? I know poems are cute, but I'm sure you could make something else. If you're comfortable with your vocals, you could make a video of yourself singing to him. And if you know you're not that great of a singer - just try to make it funny. He will probably think it is cute since he sounds like he can be sensitive. Just throwing that out there. I'm not saying you need to do that, and it's just my suggestion, but I wouldn't make a poem because he already has that idea for you. Whatever you decide to do, good luck in it, and make him smile =)

Answer 4

I've written a lot of roses are reds; you can use any of these if you like.

Roses are red, Violets are bronze.
You've got more cool than the Fonz.

Roses are red, violets are coral.
If you'll be my Caesar, I'll bring the laurel.

Roses are red, violets are sockets.
You make me feel like I'm wearing rockets.

Roses are red, violets are light
I can't wait 'til I see you tonight.

Roses are red, violets are mild.
The world just got brighter the moment you smiled.

Answer 5

Roses are red,
Violets are sweet,
You will be miserable
If you gift to me is not a treat!

Okay, seriously,
I would write a nice note from the heart, it doesn't have to be poetry to say how you feel, and all the wonderful things you think of him.

Give it a go, he will be more pleased that with anything one of us might offer!
--That Cheeky Lad

Answer 6

Song lyric, but its the loveliest I know
Vision by Peter Hammill
I have a vision of you, locked inside my head;
it creeps upon my mind, and warms me in my bed.
A vision shimering, shifting
moving in false firelight;
a vision of a vision,
protecting me from fear at night,
as the seasons roll on, and my love stays strong.

I don't know where you end, and where it is that I begin.
I simply open my mind and the memories flood on in.
I remember waking up with your arms around me;
I remember losing myself
and finding that you'd found me,
as the seasons rolled on, and my love stayed strong.

Be my child, be my lover,
swallow me up in your fire-glow.
Take my tongue, take my torment,
take my hand and don't let go.
Let me live in your life,
for you make it all seem to matter.
Let me die in your arms,
so the vision may never shatter.
The seasons roll on;
my love stays strong.

Answer 7

Will You Be My Valentine

Will you be my Valentine?
I know that I am yours.
You are like a tossing sea
And I am like your shores.
You are like an endless wave
And I your waiting sand.
And I will wait forever as
You come and take my hand.

I will wait forever, yet
You are a part of me.
I hold you in my arms, while you
Come to me endlessly.

Will you be my Valentine?
I know that I am yours.
I love you with a love that yearns
To be your golden shores.


Jen

Answer 8

You are absolutely amazing
And so very special to me
Is it really any surprise
Why with you I love to be

Each moment we are together
I feel tingles through my body
My heart begins to race
Just knowing you also love me

What was I thinking
When I said goodbye to you
I'm glad you're holding me back
Walk away, you won't let me do

We have a very special bond
Filled with magic and fantasy
Your words are my strength
Providing me with energy

With you by my side
There isn't anything I can't do
So believe me when I say
I'm so in love with you.

Answer 9

Anything - just make it funny! My husband gave me a condolences card for our first valentines, so I loved him for his originality and humour.

Answer 10

Roses are red, Violets are purple, Sugar is sweet and so is maple surple.