What is your opinion on this poem?

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What is your opinion on this poem?

Aim/Goal of Living

The unique aim of being human

Is dealing with you and others,

No matter what “True Man”

Says to me and you in our shutters.

The unique goal of living

Is dealing with you and others,

No matter which words “True Man” giving

Me and you being in our shutters.

2007-02-08 22:02:17 · 3 answers · asked by Analyst 7 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities

3 answers

its kinda confusing

2007-02-08 22:13:20 · answer #1 · answered by Tiger 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋

I think it lacks something . . .it lacks coordination. LOL.

2007-02-09 06:11:52 · answer #2 · answered by Arcana I 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋

not much sorry needs improvement.

2007-02-09 06:10:18 · answer #3 · answered by duc602 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋