Is this a good poem?? can you add silimis and metaphors for me??

Question

the subject could be anything and it doesn't have to rhyme
here it is:

We only got one world
And something's wrong with it
We do know what it is
But no one takes action

We made destructive global warming
We invented harmful wars
We have so many disasters
This is not just another warning

Don't ignore the facts
Don't settle for fiction
if no one else acts
The doesn't mean you can't take action

can you try to add similis and/or mataphors??plz!?

Answer 1

They are images spelled: similes and metaphors.
Yes, I think it is a good one. This is how I could re-write . . . kind o' crazy I bet!

Whispers in the wind:

We only got one idyllic world
But a vile moth has afflicted your tranquil modesty my Dear
Willfully depositing brazen vermin infected your virtuous libido
While wretchedly we cheer the illicit copulation with glee.

Your ozone layer!This we've faulted with a charitable Judas' kiss
While haplessly re-inventing atrocious Trojan wars
With bloody swords we ingloriously relish our vicious violence
This warning we perceive but deviously ignore

"Earthling! heed my words . . . Do not ignore Holy Writ "-
The wind whispers -"Do not whimsically ignore my wisdom
My bones and my good deeds my acts bury
But cherish the voice in the wind for your everlasting delight."

Answer 2

I think it's fine as it is. Most of the modern poets do away with ornate similes and metaphors anyway.

Answer 3

it is a good poem