Do you think this would make a good song?

Question

What if I wrote a song and used images that are conjoured up by the different plays of light and effects the Moon has on things.
Like the way it is reflected in a river and the bands of light that seem to eminate from it and the way the shadows move when it arcs across the sky.
And then if I took all these and tried to imagine them as a kind of living being in a garden biding her time until the dawn comes around.
And then if I came up with an exquisite and melodic tune to put it to that seemed to have an undertone of meloncholy and timelessness.
Do you think people would appreciate that or would it be completely overlooked and underrated?

Answer 1

"Do you think people would appreciate that or would it be completely overlooked and underrated?"

Both. It's not a commercial concept, but many of the most deeply loved songs aren't commercial.

Answer 2

Maybe. If you can link it to something people can connect to, like you made the moon refer to a girl and all the effects were what she does to a man kind of thing, it would resonate with people more. Then, it becomes a love song and has a really interesting idea behind it with lots of details. Otherwise, you're probably better off making it into a kid's science song. Good luck.

Answer 3

Not sure, sounds like a good idea but it's still on paper. When you record it let me know then I'll give it a listen!