I speak through poetry...
words are my essence...
letters are my soul.
I speak through poetry.
Similes and metaphors
I whisper them too
words upon words
poetry is what I do
I speak through poetry.
My breath is a sonnet
my blink is a rhyme
pen to paper
time after time.
I speak through poetry.
My heart is my subject
the world is my theme
just give me a minute
and I’ll write you something.
Because I speak through poetry
thats what I do.
I’ll show you the world
my poetry is for you.
Bye Julie!!
2007-02-07 12:38:16 · 12 answers · asked by crazysme2001 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
Thats very nice you are talented and I am not just saying that !
2007-02-07 12:41:17 · answer #1 · answered by LB 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
here is some of mine of penguins
Penguins
Their suits are black and their vests are white.
They waddle to the left and they waddle to the right.
They stand on the ice and they look very neat,
As they waddle along on their little flat feet
There's a penguin on the table.
There's a penguin on the chair.
There's a penguin eating popcorn.
There are penguins everywhere!
There's a penguin on the ladder.
There's a penguin on the ground.
There's a penguin on the rooftop.
There are penguins all around!
There's a penguin in the mirror.
There's a penguin next to me.
There are penguins everywhere
That only I can see!
2007-02-07 20:43:54 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
you should publish that! i love it! if you want to see, heres a poem i made:
The music was a rushing river,
it pounded over rocks and made me shiver.
It crashed against boats, and rose in the air,
it created wonder, and took away despair.
Then it all came to cease, without a thought,
no wave clashed, the people were caught
They listened in awe, as the trumpet broke the silence,
a river pounded, mimiking the words violence....
there's more, but i dont want to bore you. I love your poem though, it's beautiful.
2007-02-07 20:45:51 · answer #3 · answered by bugsandtweety 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
that is a really good one, the concept is unique indeed!!!!
How about mine??
With the increasing of technology,
we can learn astronomy.
From fans and lights,
we have reached the sattalites.
From no money in the pockets,
we have reached the rockets.
From making your room.
We have reached the moon.
thus it wont take us long to reach mars,
from vehicles known as cars.
How about it???
2007-02-09 08:44:18 · answer #4 · answered by tammy 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Congrats on a great poem. The imagery is wonderful! You have talent.
Hope this helps!
2007-02-07 20:52:25 · answer #5 · answered by 1985 & going strong 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
pretty good. i like the metaphors but im not crazy about the repeated lines. keep writing, though!
2007-02-07 20:47:36 · answer #6 · answered by Attolia 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Yeah, thats pretty tight
2007-02-08 00:40:21 · answer #7 · answered by Glamorous 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
not really. maybe you should try writing a peom about something interesting.
2007-02-07 20:42:37 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
i like it. it speaks your mind very well.
2007-02-07 20:48:17 · answer #9 · answered by blue print 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
ooh, i love it!! :D but is "bye julie" part of it? the rest of it is really good!
2007-02-07 20:41:38 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋