Can You Help Me!!! Help This Poor Little Kid!!!?

Question

I don't know how to start my first paragraph in my expository essay. My topic is about soocer.

Here is some information:

I started showing my talent when I was 7 years old. I showed my talent when I was playing with my friend in the park and beat him.

Some of the important times related is that when I beat my friend one on one 3 to 0. Another important time is when I was playing in my old school's soccer team and beat the other team 3 to 1 and got the trophy for being the best soccer player in the 4th grade.

Some of the first I learned while I was playing soccer is be in control of the ball while i'm running and do cool tricks such as keep the ball in the air with my legs for a long time.

To improve my skill, I play soccer with my friends in the park. My dad is the onewho helped me in soccer.

Playing soccer makes me feel proud of myself because i'm very good at it.

From this information, can anyone help start whith my first paragraph.

Answer 1

well first you should just write a rough graph Read it than chose the once you wet in you writing.