can someone proof read this paragraph for me thanks?

Question

Upon handling events that may interrupt plan, one must think of the quote “academic comes first”. When an event unexpectedly arises, one must consider the opportunity cost they are giving up. If one is finished with all the readings and homework, one may attend the event. However, if one is not finished with all readings and homework, one must pass up that opportunity of attending that event. If the opportunity cost is worth giving up then proceed if not, then avoid.

Answer 1

turn it in as is.

let your instructor do his or her job.

accept the grade that you deserve, and pay more attention in class.

Answer 2

Upon handling events that may interrupt (A) plan, one must think of the quote “academic comes first”. When an event unexpectedly arises, one must consider the opportunity (AND OR) cost they are giving up (OR INCURRING). If one is finished with REPLACE WITH 'ASSIGNMENTS OR OBLIGATIONS', one may attend the event. However, if one is not finished (DELETE THIS YOU ARE BEING REDUNDANT) one (SHOUD) (DECLINE THE) opportunity (DELETE). (This last sentence is overkill AND confusing ..rework it - then step back and read this out loud to yourself... In general you are making a simple and obvious statement very tedious to read Lord Morgan - a british philosopher had a famous cannon (rule): SIMPLIFY)