Love or Hate: Come back.
You know I like you
You know I love you
You know I wanna
Kiss and hug you
I see your smile
I feel your grace
I’d run a mile
To see your face
One over two
Two over three
Me over you
Is like love that isn’t true
Side by side
We should stay
I’m sorry I broke your heart
And stepped away
I wanna come back
And feel the love
‘Cause nothing’s better
Than your sweetest hugs
You walk on past
You walk right by
And sometimes you forget
To stop and say “Hi”
But when you do
When you take the time
Hearing your voice
I feel more alive
Forgive my actions
Of love or hate
But I’m shyer than you think
But now it’s too late
You stopped feeling for me
As I have felt for you
And world soon to end
As it has become so blue
Me without you
You without me
Love without hate
Is me without fate
And now I see
It’s over.
----Thanks for your comments----
2007-02-07 02:16:28 · 9 answers · asked by ViCKi!™|` 5 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
"Azi"... she IS in Junior High you know. So no duh it'd be Junior High...
2007-02-07 08:46:11 · update #1
Yes,I like it alot.
2007-02-07 02:31:38 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like the fact that your friend found the time to place humor into a delicate situation.I love it! Especially the rhymes. It's a safe way to compose a poem. 4/5.
2007-02-07 02:33:15 · answer #2 · answered by NicOOd 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Poetry is a therapeutic way to express such feelings. I relate. Honestly it's not the best poem I've ever read, but it does show that there's a poet in there. And I think your friend has talent and should keep on writing.
2007-02-07 02:22:18 · answer #3 · answered by cruztacean1964 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Wow, thats really beautiful. It has alot of depth and its really well written. Tell your friend that she or he has got a lot of talent, and to keep writing, cuz i think this poem´s great. =)
2007-02-07 02:46:07 · answer #4 · answered by Jaded 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I really like it, I often hate my work because I made it, she's just being critical on herself.
2007-02-07 02:30:10 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
ohhh...your "friend" wrote it lol i didnt writ eit vicki! jk but i like it a lot! =)
2007-02-07 09:13:10 · answer #6 · answered by i <3 [[P.IT]] 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's pretty good
2007-02-07 02:21:46 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
No, needs more emotion, too junior high!
2007-02-07 02:26:32 · answer #8 · answered by Azi 2 · 0⤊ 2⤋
i like it!
2007-02-07 02:26:01 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋