This poem good?

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i really need help w/ my poem. i dunno much stuff about pro poems. i'm just 12!

She’s just leaning over there,
Alone in the crowd,
As they keep on pushing her around.
As always, like there was no end of Earth

‘It hurts so bad’ she whispers.
'They treat me like I was bron without feelings.'

Maybe she doubt her too much.
She had noone to be with,
Because she never had the courage
To speak up for herself.

‘Why me?’

They never payed any respect
She deserved.
She always cared
But they never did.

Inside she’s crying,
Outside she’s smiling,
Like nothing’s happening.
But there was a lot going on.

‘Will they understand?’

Maybe she doubt her too much.
She had noone to be with
Because she never had the courage
To speak up for herself.

She thinks there’s no point to live.
But there is,
Maybe she just had to look for it.
And she goes off, not knowing what will happen.

‘I guess it’s this hard.’

Then, she found someone,
Someone so dear and precious.
She promised herself never to let go.
But he didn’t feel the same way.
‘Why me?’

After that,
She was always hiding and crying
She doubt herself too much
And she just disappeared silently in her closet

She was gone,
As if she were never there,
They wondered where she went,
Noone knew.

‘Soon, they will.’

They hurt her so bad,
Noone knew.
She would never forgive them, ever.
As she would never forgive herself.

They found her little quiet small diary in her bag.
‘It hurt so bad
Inside I was crying
Outside I was smiling
Like nothing’s happening
There was more to that than a small innocent smile
Behind that smile was everything noone would understand.’

They read on,
Knowing it was their fault
But she would never forgive them
As she would never forgive herself.

did i spell 'noone' wrong?i've asked people and they say it doesnt have any space.

Answer 1

They were probably in second grade. It most certainly has a space. By the way, nice to meet you. I am also twelve. It sounds a lot like how I feel inside sometimes. You are a great poet! Are you planning to publish it? I have one of my poems published in a book called Words From the Woods. I was ten or eleven when it was published. It is called Horseplay. Thanks for sharing your poem. Do you have older siblings? I have an older sister who makes me sick, because my parents think that everything she does is perfect, and if I do not do the exact same thing, I'm wrong. Sorry. I didn't mean to do that. Thanks!

Answer 2

Very good. Yes, indeed, the spelling needs some correction. As the first answerer said, keep on writing, you have something to share with this world.

Answer 3

Not bad really. You really need to work on your spelling. Poor spelling takes alot away from a poem. Keep writing.

Answer 4

sounds good, i dont know too much about poetry but why not try a lil more imagery; for example:
"she thinks there's no pt to live"
you could try "showing" how she thinks..make sense?

:)