I want to say this sentence as intelligent sounding as possible...
"Ultimately, i want to achieve as much knowledge about Science, Religions, and Human Social behaviors (I guess Anthropology) as possible"
best answer gets 10 points!
2007-02-06 14:41:25 · 12 answers · asked by bob888 3 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
My ultimate goal, over all, is to obtain and gather as much knowledge and awareness as is humanly possible about the subject matters Science, Religions, and Anthropology.
2007-02-06 14:55:31 · answer #1 · answered by B 3 · 0⤊ 2⤋
Ultimately, I want to become an expert in Science, Religions and Human Social Behaviors.
Or if you'd prefer to use the word knowledge I'd say
Ultimately, I want to gain as much knowledge as possible about Science, Religions and Anthropology.
Can you add to your sentence and tell your audence "how" you will gain this knowledge? for example, "By living in the Amazon jungle, I anticipate I will gain a great deal of knowledge about environmental science, primitive religion and native __ behavior."
Please consider that your statement sounds awfully broad. What are you studying? Science could be anything from biology to zoology to astronomy; religions - sheesh! and even anthropology covers many, many topics! Good luck.
2007-02-06 14:51:41 · answer #2 · answered by Cathy M 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Sounds good to me, but your grammar/spelling is bad. Ultimately, I want to achieve as much knowledge about science, religions, and human social behavior as possible.
2007-02-06 14:47:46 · answer #3 · answered by Sunkist3599 3 · 0⤊ 2⤋
My ultimate goal is to acquire as much knowledge as possible about Science, Religion, and Anthropology.
2007-02-06 14:50:51 · answer #4 · answered by flywho 5 · 0⤊ 3⤋
My goal is to attain as much knowledge as is possible about Science, Religions, and Anthropology.
2007-02-06 14:47:06 · answer #5 · answered by kf 4 · 0⤊ 2⤋
My goal is to acquire as much knowledge of science, religion and human social behavior as possible.
2007-02-06 14:47:57 · answer #6 · answered by worldinspector 5 · 1⤊ 2⤋
"Ultimately, I would like to gain as much knowledge as possible about science, religions, and anthropology."
2007-02-06 14:46:55 · answer #7 · answered by amy02 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I'll assume this is for a college application personal statement.
"My three main areas of interest are science, religious studies, and anthropology, and I look forward to learning as much as possible about each of them throughout my college career."
As one other respondent noted, narrow down your anticipated emphasis in science - chemistry, physics, biology, bacteriology, genetics, medical science, earth science (geology). And consider what you would like to do in science (planning to attend medical school, for example, is very different than earning your B.S. and testing blood in a hospital lab is very different than conducting graduate-level scientific research). When you're writing (unless you're writing for a politician), remember that specific and detailed = better. (But fancy and out-of-place words such as 'ultimately' are not always better. There is absolutely nothing ultimate about college.)
2007-02-06 17:01:51 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
"My life's work will be to learn as much as possible about science, religions and human social behaviors."
2007-02-06 14:45:43 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
Once I noticed hair growing on my chest I have never hestitated to delve into the esoteric milieu of science blah, blah..............
2007-02-06 18:01:29 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 1⤋