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i posted this before but it was with other poems and made the reading too long so now im going to post them individually.

plz be honest but not too brutal :) thx

any advice is welcomed, mind the previous statement^^^^
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you can say i love you,
a million times and one.
but theres nothing you can say to me,
that will change the things you've done.
it pains me to reject you,
it really truly does.
but i'm just trying to protect myself,
from what already was.
babe you know i care for you,
so much that it hurts to say -
loving you is way too stressful.
such a costly price to pay,
for every doleful tear i shed,
so arduous to admit.
for every callous word you said,
but id have to say its been worth it.

2007-02-06 10:12:03 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music Polls & Surveys

5 answers

Wow..thats really good. Its very deep and very well written. You´re very talented, keep up the great work. =)

2007-02-06 10:17:35 · answer #1 · answered by Jaded 7 · 1 0

good work. Although, i was shocked to read at the end that it all had been worth it. Maybe because you're learning from your mistakes....i hope :)

2007-02-06 18:34:17 · answer #2 · answered by CherBear 3 · 0 0

it's ok but full of conflicting statements

2007-02-06 18:22:26 · answer #3 · answered by Tek ~aka~Legs! 7 · 0 0

It makes you sound weak and pathetic.

2007-02-06 18:17:13 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0 1

It's ok.....

2007-02-06 18:15:54 · answer #5 · answered by Susie 6 · 1 0

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