Who out there feels "NOT LOVED"?

Question

If u knew how kind I could be
would u love me?
If u knew how thoughtful i am
would u love me?
If u knew how gifted i am
would u love me?
If u knew how intimate i can be
would u love me?
If u knew how funny I am
would u love me?
if u knew how much i care
would u love me?
If u knew how sure of myself i am
would u love me?
If u knew how happy u make me
would u love me?
If u knew how sensitive i can be
would u love me?
If u knew how much u fill my thoughts
would u love me?
If u knew how spiritual I am
would u love me?
If u knew that only 50 percent of the time i
possessed these qualities but the rest of the time
i fall short,
would u love me?
Of all this ive said its still only part of me
the TRUTH?
I am only some of these but I can be more if only u knew
how much I really love U.

Answer 1

What a wonderful poem. After a divorce you do feel unloved for a long time. You feel you are not worth loving. You have no self esteem. Your family is destroyed , what you worked for is gone. Your poem is very kind in words. But the people that are out there don't really know who you are you had given that to your ex and it will take a long time to get your self esteem back. I know still working on it .

Answer 2

Too many "ifs" and "I can be-s". Are these the things that are hidden in your heart where no one can see or benefit from them or do you express any of it out loud? All the good thoughts and intentions in the world are not enough if your mate is living in a barren land devoid of any expressed emotional support.

Answer 3

I Loved Your Poem
It said everything that I feel
Thank You

Answer 4

I only feel "Not loved" when I have PMS, and to tell the truth, I'm probably not very lovable at that time. LOL

Answer 5

I'm married and I feel the only one that lovs me is my 2 year old

Answer 6

I have never felt truly loved by my husband. I feel like he loves how I make him feel (emotionally) but that is all. I even feel like at times my daughter loves my husband and his family more than me... lol... i need a therapist... ha ha

Answer 7

Always remember if there is no one in this world that you think loves you just remember that bill collectors will always love you.Or a least until you pay late.

Answer 8

Not this chickie .. I feel very loved and cherished by my husband and family and by God above.

Answer 9

D.J. Quick; I ain't interested -but as 'sure-as-shootin': YOU are a poet!!
NOW.. lemme tell yo' HOW hated.. I am.. . .

"Why.. ARE yuh?" -you well-might ask.. (a reasonable question, even)..

Well, it began, like this: my 4-tooth ceramic upper-BRIDGE, failed.. and
I wish TO declare, I look to-be, a cross between, Dracula, and
THE most irracible, Irish-Scottish
"Whaht-Trash" -ever to wander outa THE worst.. "punch-up" trailer-ghetto
-in ALL Tennersee; -see? (Yu'd Better!.. 'coz THIS, isn't Tennersee; -SEE?

Originally I was a successfull, semi-retired Land Baron,
from a mere hundred miles (2 hours), north O'This Aussie City
that don't understand.. Country Folk: no! -Not a bit, they don't!
I listen -LOUDLY- to Dwyatt Yoakum, Willie Nenson;
Waylon Jennings, Wanda Jackson, but -especially- Bonnie Raitt; -yesir!

But my appearance has seen Our loyal Security Guards,
thrice -zero-in ON me.. on alighting -at any platform- on the Joondalup line.
Quickly they (wrongly assume) I am looking-for an altercation
-and, within seconds, they attempt to FRISK me! I refuse,
..then I find myself 'Resisting'; NEXT thing, two of these
un-smiling, dark-complexioned Jewish 'Blue-Shirts', attempt to, both
hand-cuff me, and/or: PELT ME out into the driving rain!

But, I am a (very)-fit 55 year-old, olde-FARMER.. well-used to chucking a few-
hundred toupa a-bout.. and I spin, and turn ON these Gallilean 'assailents'
in the Employ-of The Queen, and beat into them: thrice leaving..
the miserable-pair of [mean-spirited], non-Aussies -in a black-eyed HEAP.
I dust myself down, wink at the asian 'pretties' watching, -in near dis-belief
(that they would "chuck an OLD man -OUT into such inclimant conditions!")
-AND that he'd "turned-the-tables" SO-savagely ON these arrogant
fresh immigrants.. who stupidly view the Elderly Aussie, [as perhaps] "easy prey"..
to 'perhaps', get-UP their 'tally' of weekly-arrests.. (NOT so easy!!)

THAT is MY story, for tonight; (and, Oh! Since the infiltration of "OUR"
Security-Forces, here IN Australia.. one has to expediantly carry 'shonky'-I.D..
-just in-case these Oh-so-TRUSTED Jewish Security Guards, [managed]
TO defeat me, -from going-about my normal, lawfull Aussie business!

All THIS-kinda hassle, just 'cozza evil-lookin,' jagged top-teeth!
(Amazing; -no?) Of course -as soon as my elder bro's 'Stipend' arrives-
I intend to shell-out $3,000 for a nice ceramic bridge-job;
-(or go to the Vietnamese, for a 'cut-price, just-as-good 'job'..).

Oh, my two brothers -in this era of mechanisation, coupled with the importation
of really EXPERT Pinoy farmhands- well, they.. not only PAY me to
'stay well-away'; older-'bro' gives me his 'cast-off' (big) Mercedes cars
-which he thinks he's "driven-into the ground"; -but i find that a change
-of spark-plugs, and a dose OF fresh motor-oil, sees them running beautifully;
beautifull-enough to take my 12 year-old mestizo son, with his stainless
.22 -Magnum pump-action, and me.. with my 12 -bore Italian Lupara
side-by-side shotgun on a 'lightning dash', [uninvited].. TO the farm,
-for an early-spring, rabbit "shoot-up"! (-Great Fun, indeed!).
(The rabbit, from Egypt, AND southern England is a BLIGHT
on Agriculture)..
-so what BETTER chance to get some legitimate shooting-practice for a boy
-of twelve? He just LOVES his quick-firing rifle, and the whole, exiting outing!
(And..who knows? -Being Australia, one could meet..either,
thieving Aboriginals in stollen jeeps, -or armed sheep-thieves;
even: very possible: THIS, now IS 'The Wild West'!

Answer 10

I do.

Nice poem tho.