My daughter wrote this.....
I want to be free,
But not like a bee.
I want to fly away
Somewhere I can stay.
If you want to go somewhere,
I'll take you there.
If you want to be free,
Then come with me.
By Amber M*****
age: 17
2007-02-06 04:42:46 · 12 answers · asked by Tweetalette 3 in Society & Culture ➔ Other - Society & Culture
It is really good!
2007-02-06 04:45:29 · answer #1 · answered by ♥ 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think if I was you I would have a chat with her. From what I read it dosent sound very good.. She says she wants to be free but not like a bee ( when I think of bee I see flowers and sweet smelly things, but bees are workers and have busy jobs). She also states she wants to go somewhere she can stay. It just sounds like some red flags are looking right at you Mom!!
2007-02-06 13:15:02 · answer #2 · answered by Rach30 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The poem begins by declaring a desire for freedom, but ends entreating the reader that to be free, "...come with me."
Surely the author is a free-thinker. But free-thinking can be pointless when out of the context of other free-thinkers.
The true nature of freedom is a theme well-deserving of much reflection.
2007-02-06 12:50:09 · answer #3 · answered by Bog-man 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like Amber is already free, go Amber go fly and be free-er
2007-02-06 12:48:36 · answer #4 · answered by Infinite and Eternal Reality 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I don't mean to be rude or jump to conclusions, but to me it sounds like she is writting about being stoned and she wants her friend to come with her. Other than that, it sounds good. Peaceful...
2007-02-06 12:47:32 · answer #5 · answered by Mrs. Wifey! 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think your daughter is talented and the poem is lovely.
2007-02-06 12:54:08 · answer #6 · answered by zzum 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think it's absolutely beautiful! I also think she should pursue this wonderful talent.
2007-02-06 12:46:05 · answer #7 · answered by Cricket 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I like it , its good simple but effective
2007-02-06 13:57:28 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
very nice...It gave me a warm feeling
2007-02-06 12:46:57 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
your daughter is think about running away.
2007-02-06 12:53:29 · answer #10 · answered by $0.02 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋