This is what I go so far:
"Dear Ms. Friel,
I am sorry for disrespecting your staff. I honestly have learned from just thinking of going to behavior school, some of my friends' parents were telling me about their kids going there and that it was terrible and after that, it just came to me that I might be going there. Behavior school has been on my mind everyday and I've been stressing over all the craziest things that might happen when I go there, and I seriously do think that this 'suspension' was all I needed to realize that if this doesn't stop then that is where I will be going. But I promise that I won't be sagging, disrespecting nor talking back to the teachers. Could I please have one more chance? If I screw this up [which I won't] you can send me out like that, but I promise that I have learned from this.
Thanks-- Taylor"
Can someone correct this or make it sound better please? 10 points..
2007-02-05 19:45:24 · 19 answers · asked by Julio 2 in Pregnancy & Parenting ➔ Adolescent
Judging by your response to an askers question:
"jesus christ.. tell me about it.. I have to go to the school that they are sending your son [behavior school] and guess what I did? I asked that deans if they were dating, not only did I get referred to behavior school, I got a ticket for tresspassing cuz the fa.g dean dont like me.. these schools are so fu.cked up, I swear!! My mom is in the process of appealing my referral to behavior school, her first conference will be with the Assistant Principle, then Principle then if they keep denying me, my mom is gonna take it up to the school board..
APPEAL IT!!! Email me and I'll let you know how everything went with me with the first appeal conference.. rrlasvegas3@aol.com "
...I believe you need behavior school.
Don't write the letter, because it won't do you any good. Just go to behavior school, try to learn from it and move on. It sounds like you need to grow up and start taking responsibility for your own actions and stop having Mommy bail you out each time.
2007-02-06 03:48:04 · answer #1 · answered by Jen P 2 · 1⤊ 3⤋
"Dear Ms. Friel,
I am sorry for being disrespectful to you and your staff. I honestly have learned what I did was wrong and why just thinking about going to behavior school and taking the time to think about my behavior and attitude, some of my friends' parents were telling me about the time their kids spent there and that it was terrible for them and after that, it just came to me that I might be going there. Behavior school has been on my mind everyday and I've been stressing over all the craziest things that might happen when I go there, and I seriously do think that this 'suspension' was all I needed to realize that if this doesn't stop and I don’t grow up and be respectful then that is where I will be going and belong. But I promise that I won't be sagging, disrespecting nor talking back to the teachers or any of the other staff I will be more responsible. If it is possible Could I please have one more chance to prove to you and the staff that I have spent allot of time thinking this though and I know what I did was wrong and how I should behave from now on? If I screw this up [which I won't] you can send me out like that, but I promise that I have learned from this.
Thanks-- Taylor"
2007-02-05 19:59:45 · answer #2 · answered by debrasearch 6 · 2⤊ 2⤋
"Dear Ms. Friel,
I am sorry for being disrespectful of you and your staff. I have honestly learned from just imagining of attending a behavioral school.
Some of my friends' parents tell me about their children going there and that it was terrible. After that, it just came to me that I might be going there myself.
Behavior school has been on my mind everyday and I've been stressing over all the crazy and horrible things that might happen if I ever had to go there.
I seriously do believe that this 'suspension' was all I needed to realize that if my behavior does not improve, then that is where I could possibly wind up. But I promise that I won't be sagging, disrespectful, nor will I talk back to the teachers.
Could I please have one more chance? If I fail to improve my behavior and continue to be disrespectful, [which I won't] you can send me to any place you think would help me to achieve my new goals, but I assure you that I have learned from this whole situation.
Thank you in advance for your consideration in this matter,
Taylor
2007-02-05 20:00:15 · answer #3 · answered by melissa 6 · 2⤊ 1⤋
Dear Ms. Friel,
I am sorry for disrespecting your staff. I have honestly learned a lesson just from the thought of going to behavior school. Behavior school has been on my mind every day, and some of my friends' parents have told me about their kids' experiences there and that it was terrible. This suspension has given me a serious wake-up call and I do realize that if my actions do not change that I will be going there. If you are willing to give me one more chance, I promise my behavior will change and I will not disrespect or talk back to the teachers. I have learned my lesson and sincerely apologize for my actions.
2007-02-05 20:00:33 · answer #4 · answered by Hamlette 6 · 0⤊ 2⤋
Dear Ms. Friel,
These past several days and even weeks I've spent worrying about attending behavior school for my actions not only in this incident but the ones leading up to it and realize there is no one to blame but myself. The school has been very tolerant of my rude behavior and has every right to take what they feel is the proper action and I will accept it as only I can. There is no one to blame but me.
My request in writing this is for you to please reconsider and to give me the opportunity to prove myself and to prove I do belong here with the other students whom I have disrespected as well as the teachers. I have no reason for my action as you have no reason to allow me back other then my word and knowing that if I fail to hold up to my end of the bargain you are capable of making my next punishment much more difficult on me then this one would be.
Thank you for even taking the time to read and consider what I am asking.
Respectfully,
Taylor
2007-02-08 02:23:44 · answer #5 · answered by Braveheart 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dear Ms. Friel,
I am truly sorry for disrespecting your staff. Thank you for the wake up call. I see now that my behavior is leading me down a path of self-destruction. I have been doing a lot of thinking about my actions and I am not proud of myself. I am going to get help to see why I do what I do and say what I say. I know that I do not deserve a second chance. However, I will prove to you, your staff, and to myself that I am a better person than what I have been. Thank you for taking the time to read this.
Sincerely,
Taylor
2007-02-05 20:01:12 · answer #6 · answered by K 1 · 3⤊ 1⤋
okay. So you say all this and then you go along with prank calling your dean (for others reading this look at his other questions). You are sending them an example of why you need to go to a behavioural school. You seriously need to think about what your behaviour says to others because pulling crank calls on teachers is not a way to say that you won't be disrespecting your teachers. You may not have made the call but you went along with it and used your phone and did not stop your friend. Your actions show the truth. They will not believe your letter
2007-02-08 20:15:00 · answer #7 · answered by Rachel 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dear Ms. Friel, During my time in suspension from school I have thought about how unfair my behavior has been to you, the staff and my classmates. The thought of having to attend a behavioral management school is causing me alot of stress. I have spoken with some of my friends and their parents and it does not sound like a place I want to attend; maybe this is what I needed to experience because I think I may be scared straight now. I apologize for the disrespect I have shown and for the disruption I have caused in our classroom. I am respectfully requesting one more chance at remaining in my current school with my classmates. I understand that if I am disrespectful one more time or cause a disruption in class that a behavioral management school is the next step in my educational career. Thank you , Taylor
2016-05-23 22:51:44 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I can give it a go.....
Dear Mrs Friel,
I am very sorry for disrespecting your staff. As I do not wish to attend behaviour school I have been thinking about it everyday and know it is not a place I would like to be. I have had some feedback from some students and their parents about the school and it frightens be to even think of being there. Being suspended has made me sit back and think about my mistakes and I promise to smarten up my act and respect the teachers and my elders. Please, give me another chance to prove to you that I can do this and show you that I have truly learn ed from my mistake.
Kindest regards
Taylor
There, I hope this helps you and you do learn from your mistakes...I was once like you when I was young and gave some of the teachers alot of grief. I am now a teacher myself (in childcare). BEHAVE!!!!! and I wish you luck....
2007-02-05 20:00:29 · answer #9 · answered by Jassie's mum 2 · 1⤊ 3⤋
Dear Ms. Friel
This letter is in regards to my recent behavior and your subsequent punishment.
First let me say I am truly sorry for my actions. I have come to realize that I have acted childish and disrespectful. For that I no excuse. I would like to apologize to every one that was hurt and every ones day that was disrupted.
I am requesting that your choice to send me to Behavior school be lifted. I am hoping, along with the school and my parents, that we could come up with a different solution and/or solutions.
I would like to be giving a second chance to show you, the school and my parents that I have learned from my mistakes and to prove to everyone that I can and will be a very good student.
Thank you for you time and consideration.
Taylor.
2007-02-05 20:00:10 · answer #10 · answered by LadyCatherine 7 · 4⤊ 3⤋