I’m going to hold you forever
Love you for eternity
Trust you with my life
Believe you with all of my heart
This I promise you this Valentines Day
I want your body next to me at night
I want you in my dreams
I want to be in your arms
I want your love to enfold me
So I promise you this Valentines Day
Before I become your wife
I’ll do all the things I should
All the things I have
And all the things I could
Everything you do for me
I’ll do for you
My lips you’ll always have to kiss
My eyes to gaze into
My hand to hold
My heart to love
My body and soul
This I promise you this Valentines Day
My love you’ll always have
This I promise you this Valentines Day
2007-02-05 19:37:11 · 7 answers · asked by angelicpanda27 3 in Society & Culture ➔ Holidays ➔ Valentine's Day
Very nice. He's going to be very happy with you and he's lucky too.
2007-02-05 19:43:50 · answer #1 · answered by whlydg 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
To My Fiance Poem
2016-11-07 07:08:39 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
umm.. the first 2 major stanzas are a bit.. well, iffy
but the last 2 ones, starting from "before i become your wife", are terrific i think!
and i think you should admit one of the 2 "this i promise you this valentine's day" phrases at the end
just keep one
maybe the one before the "my love you'll always have" phrase
2007-02-05 19:46:55 · answer #3 · answered by mel 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A subscription to his favorite magazine. A little something for his tool box (ie: flashlight, set of screwdrivers etc...). An emergency kit for his car. But the best thing is a card. All he wants and needs is you.
2016-03-18 01:36:02 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hope you a happy life with your future husband!!good luck!!
2007-02-05 20:06:10 · answer #5 · answered by donia f 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love it, but the first two look the same, I mean they mean the same.. But otherwise, great poem.
2007-02-05 22:21:54 · answer #6 · answered by MICKEY MOUSE 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes
2007-02-06 00:41:31 · answer #7 · answered by Monkey 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋