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Except for the word "as", yes.

2007-02-05 19:28:27 · answer #1 · answered by D.L. Miller 3 · 0 0

it's grammatically correct, but it would be better if it wasn't in the passive voice ("are expected"). Who expects them to keep the info confidential. Also, who specifically are the people keeping the info secret?

Consider "(Blank) expects (these people...but be specific) to keep the information confidential."

Ex: The federal government expects its elected leaders to keep certain information secret.

This is more specific and clear than your original question. Hope this helps! Good luck.

2007-02-05 19:30:30 · answer #2 · answered by zzzzzzzzz27 3 · 0 1

It is correct.
It could be shortened to: "Authorized people are to keep all information confidential."

2007-02-05 19:29:13 · answer #3 · answered by ignoramus 7 · 0 0

These authorized people are expected to keep all the information confidential.?
THIS SHOUD BE THE QUESTION.......THE USAGE OF "AS"
IN SUCH SENTENCES SHOULD BE AVOIDED

2007-02-05 19:30:54 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

I would put it this way;

Authorized people are expected to keep all information confidential.

Maybe even drop the all.

2007-02-05 19:29:37 · answer #5 · answered by Ron H 6 · 1 0

i'm not particular about the sentence out of context regardless of the indisputable fact that the verb 'create' has been conjugated incorrectly. it really is the he/she/it style and hence should be 'creates'. The sentence ought to then examine: ...soreness creates demons...

2016-12-03 19:06:48 · answer #6 · answered by klosterman 4 · 0 0

it is unnecessary to write as confidential....it is simply confidential

2007-02-05 19:30:01 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

Who are "These" people.....you need an objective for "these"....Remove "These" and remove "as"

2007-02-05 19:39:37 · answer #8 · answered by Chris B 4 · 0 0

No, it's not.

2007-02-05 19:37:28 · answer #9 · answered by ericscribener 7 · 0 0

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