um can someon eplease give me some good ideas for describing a bakery.
i have to write a descriptive paragraph on a bakery.
i've got the smell and that written down but help would be great thanks!!
2007-02-05 18:00:10 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
OK, so you have the smells in mind right? Well, when you do descriptive writing, you have to literally imagine a place....bakery in this instance.....What colors do you see? What kind of liting is in the room? Is it one room, two? How about the furniture? Other customers, employees...? What kinds of cookies, pasteries, cakes etc.? What decorations do you see? A 2 for 1 special on mondays? Do you see what I mean....basically, writing is all about making it up......
2007-02-05 18:18:26 · answer #1 · answered by ali 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Mouth -watering
aroma,pipping hot,drooling,
Creamy tasty cakes
2007-02-06 02:19:29 · answer #2 · answered by Blur Blur Gal 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
how bout what kinds of people you see there and what you see them do or buy...
2007-02-06 02:20:00 · answer #3 · answered by theclassbookworm0615 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋