The Lindberghs were willing to do anything to get their son back, so they left the $50,000 at the ransom note author’s desired place.
I know that "at the ransom note author’s desired place" doesn't make sense but how would you reword this phrase so that makes sense?
2007-02-05 11:42:38 · 15 answers · asked by Jennifer Genuine. 3 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
The Lindberghs were willing to do anything to get their son back, so they left $50,000 at the location specified in the ransom note.
2007-02-05 11:46:38 · answer #1 · answered by bobcat97 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The Lindberghs were willing to do anything to get their son back, so they left the $50,000 at the desired place written in the author's ransom note.
2007-02-05 11:58:18 · answer #2 · answered by sam 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The lindberghs were willing to do anything to get their son back, so they left the $50,000 at the location desired by the ransom note's author.
2007-02-05 11:50:14 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
The Lindberghs were willing to do anything to get their son back,so they left $50,000 at the place where the ransom note had said to.
2007-02-05 11:48:39 · answer #4 · answered by jobaby 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
The Lindberghs were willing to do anything to get their son back; so, they left the $50,000 at the location mentioned in the ransom note.
2007-02-05 11:47:20 · answer #5 · answered by strayinma 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
The Lindberghs were willing to do anything to get their son back,so they left the $50,000 note at the authors' desired place.
2007-02-05 11:48:52 · answer #6 · answered by Kev 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
The Lindberghs were willing to do anything to get their son back, so they left the $50,000 at the kidnappers requested place
Maybe that'd make more sense?
2007-02-05 12:03:40 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Determined to get their son back, the Lindberghs left $50,000 where the ransom note said to.
=] is that okay? I changed "willing to do anything" --made it not so wordy, and mixed it around. You are using way to many words to get your point across.
=] bol
2007-02-05 11:48:35 · answer #8 · answered by latina.licious 1 · 1⤊ 1⤋
The Lindberghs were desperate to get their son back; they left the $50,000 requested by the kidnappers at the drop-off location.
2007-02-05 11:47:48 · answer #9 · answered by keengrrl76 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
"at the desired place of the ransom note author" assuming you still have to use the same words.
2007-02-05 11:46:39 · answer #10 · answered by fuhreezing 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋