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Question

I ALWAYS WILL LOVE YOU:

Standing here all on my own,
watching life go by,
taking in those dreadful words,
...a tear drops from my eye,
I stood there as i watched you run,
and waited for the pain,
love can be a painful thing,
you used my love in vain,
Why'd you leave me here to cry?,
our love had felt so...right,
why'd you go and break my heart,
just like you did that night,
let me kiss your lips once more,
so I can see it's true,
help me see your love is gone,
that I can't be with you,
don't leave me here to fall apart,
to watch you fade away,
tell me how you really feel,
and why you just won't stay,
I never thought I'd cry so much,
I want to see this through...
although you'll never feel for me.....
I always will love you.


NO ANSWERS :



I look to my fingers to write out some wisdom,
I look up above to try and read the Kingdom,
I look all around, in and out, even crawl through to see,
But all I can find is there are no answers for me.

Hesitant at first to admit my feelings inside,
But as time went on, I could no longer hide.
I fell, and fell hard, and had not one regret,
When my heart found love, my mind was set.

You, you were wonderful, too good to be true,
That saying is valid, for I no longer have you.
You came and went, leaving me alone
And now I'm recovering in the place from which I was thrown.

I know more now than when first I came,
What I know now is my feelings are not the same.
So mixed up and jumbled; never making sense
The only thing clear is life is no white picket fence.




FEELING OF LAME:

Consumed by fear
Blinded by pain
Nothing to offer
But this feeling of blame
Many things were said
And few were done
Trusted by all
Misguided by one
Alone in this world
As the people pass by
With the look of agony
And tears in their eyes
Swallowed by hate
Forgetting your love
Paying this debt
While you rest above
Sometimes hearing
What sounds like your voice
A constant reminder
It was always my choice
Days pass me by
As the pain grown strong
Still your love is here
My life seems so long
Consumed by fear
Blinded by pain
Nothing to offer
But this feeling of blame

WHEN I SEE YOUR FACE:

when i see your face i smile

just a moment is worth the while

you pick me up and dont put me down

our lips touch and theres not a sound

i stare into your eyes

you stare into mine

only one glance

and every thing's fine

if you cry

or if you die

i will be there beside you

and i will do it to

love can go different ways

but when im with you im here to stay

NO MORE FEELING NO MORE HATE:
the dead are rising as were falling

to many names but who's calling

one more chance to take the stand

until were of to neverland

the viruse grows in strength and numbers

leaves you thinking of the wonders

the soundes come from east and west

which decission is the best

one last bang and then its done

who is that, is that the one

who made it end, who made it great

or is he the one who cleared your slate

no more feeling no more hate

Answer 1

indeed you are a brillant writer.my head bow to you. keep on doing what you are doing and my advise is to take your work to the distance. i absolutely love the first one. but then again all of them was just to die for.

i write too and so i must give credit where its due.you deserve it.keep on doing your thing.
p.s looking forward to reading some more some where soon,maybe you will publish a book? i do hope so.

Answer 2

The stone represents unfeeling or unloving. The "above floor" often represents something you're attentive to as adversarial to your subconscious {decrease than floor or water} The snakes meaning could be benign, besides the undeniable fact that there are 2 of a various varieties which represents a decision. by using fact which you're sitting on the stone it potential you have been neglecting this determination for it slow. At one time this determination replaced right into a "blur" yet now the concepts look sparkling. Snakes can characterize healing and sometime the male physique section. in case you have a terror of snakes it could propose you are worried the concepts or determination. in case you do no longer worry or hate snakes the colour is substantial. If green it deals with existence strengthen or potential. crimson = sexual Yellow = information. Snakes could additionally characterize the potential of a understanding. My wager is which you have a relationship concern that has grown chilly or unfeeling or there's a mild conflict with a male on your existence that has been ongoing over the years. you be attentive to it exist and now the concepts in front of you're sparkling, you in basic terms might desire to choose for the only or different. yet another determination is a sort of recent objective or occupation or educational risk is starting to be sparkling and you'll be able to desire to choose for to bypass from the stone place you're in to a sparkling place of potential and gear.

Answer 3

thats amazing ,
i got a metal band and am looking forward buying some poems 4m you
my email is [e-mail] if u like the idea

Answer 4

Did you make these yourself? Keep up the good work! I also write poems obviously not as good as you.

Answer 5

WOW. That's REALLY really good!!