Rap Beats-U really need to help!?

Question

I am 14, and I want to be a beatmaker for rap/r&b artists. I havent been making beats that long. But I dont want to bother trying if they are not good, so will you listen to them and tell me what you think?
**I have to use a demo program and a computer keyboard, so if you dont like the quality or something its not my fault, I do the best I have with what I have.**

http://www.myspace.com/mansfieldohio3rdstryke

Answer 1

I like the 'murder street' track on your myspace... is that original? That kick drum is all kinds of delicious.